I was just wondering If anyone would like to give some advice on my latest short story on how I can improve as I just seem to be stalling if not getting worse...

I was going to post in SYW section but I recently had something in there and I dont want to clog it up with more of my crap. So I thought I would look for one willing reader.

Its a fantasy thing with a bit of shapeshifting and sorcery at about 3.6k

I'm open to returning the favour, though I dont have much expertise just yet..

Thanks for reading.