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Thread: Too much like anime...a predicament

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    Shut Up and Write Sarashay's Avatar
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    I'm guessing you're about at the age I was when I was writing stories that resembled Duran Duran videos. (Which is not a criticism by any means, merely an observation.)

    Focus on the story, on what happens next and why it matters. If the anime elements are a truly essential part of that, then leave them in. If they're flashy window dressing that impedes the storytelling, leave them out. Some elements may work; others might not. Let the story decide.
    Last edited by Sarashay; 05-09-2012 at 02:57 AM. Reason: tweaking a sentence

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