Teens Writing for Teens, issue 6

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Elysium, let me know if there's anything wrong with your av. I had to save it as a JPG, and it gave me a warning, but it looks the same to me.
 

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Well, I know one thing. I will need a beta to check my formatting.
 

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YAY ALLY!

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Okay, Sherlockette snippet time!

“So your brother had some sort of schizo attack that left you traumatized and ashamed,” concluded Veronika, sitting back in her chair. “And he hurt himself, or hurt someone else, and now you never go anywhere unprepared.”

Sophie did not make eye contact with Veronika, simply took a breath and continued typing.

“So?” asked Veronika. “Am I right?”

Sophie ignored her and raised her hand. “Ms. Gillan,” she asked, her voice loud, “could you repeat what you said about molar conversions? I couldn’t hear, Veronika was saying something.”

Veronika glowered at the girl until the bell rang.

When it did, Sophie slammed her laptop shut and rounded on Veronika.

“Okay, I have a bit of information for you, Miss Metzger, since you’re so keen on knowing my every secret,” she said. “I have an older brother. He plays soccer and only listens to ‘80s music and watches way too much Japanese anime. His favorite video game is Call of Duty and his favorite movie is Independence Day. He wants to be a lawyer because of Atticus Finch. And he just so happens to suffer from schizophrenia.” She leaned in closer, and her voice took on a poisonous tone. “He isn’t ‘schizo’. He would never hurt anybody. And I’m not ashamed of him.”

Sophie straightened back up in her chair. “You know, not all secrets are kept for nefarious purposes,” she said. “There’s just this thing where you respect other people and the things they may or may not choose to tell you, and it’s called privacy. I guess you’ve never heard of it.”

And with that, she rose to her feet and walked out the door, leaving Veronika alone in the Chem lab.
 

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Thanks, guys! It is something very important to me, to have a character with a mental illness rather than a token mentally ill character.
 

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I second that, especially as someone with a mental illness.
 

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There's a decent chance you're a manic depressive by mere virtue of writing aptitude.

Not a guarantee of course. Correlation does not equal causation and all that--but it's an interesting statistic nonetheless.

In other news I've stopped throwing my pity parties and have gotten back to pushing out more submissions. :D
 

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I am a manic depressive.

9 PAGES. :D

ETA: Okay, I've not finished this scene (and this song), but I'm tired so I'm going to go to bed soon. I'm sure I'll figure out where I am.
 
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thanks guys!

I'm still rather proud of all i did today with school stuff, but then those warm fuzzy happy feelings disappeared later today because of shit. Oh well it was nice while it lasted. Tomorrow besides a small meeting with my teacher, I'm off all day, so I'm going to write/edit all day and go to the park. I'm actually rather excited.
 

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I love that my Economics teacher has 'The Only Exception' on his iPod.
 
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Maddie is currently covering "You Belong With Me".

I got my trifold board today. It is way bigger than I thought. o_O