honestly not good.
1) school issues are growing worst, now my mom is setting up a meeting with the dean and my professor. I'm stressing and really depressed about this.
2) Yesterday i got critiqued by the class for the second chapter of FREAKS. GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!! I dont know how to win! Everyone on AW, that has read my first few chapters have told me i had way too much background and "Telling"... so i cut that all out, i followed the advice by multiple people to show everything and give away the characters background and stuff through out the whole book...
Then all my reviews said "They didnt connect with the characters" Now this might have been because they didn't read the first chapter, but some that did still had that comment! They told me to add more background and such. SERIOUSLY!?!?! I JUST TOOK THAT ALL OUT!
Just frustrated and upset now.
1) school issues are growing worst, now my mom is setting up a meeting with the dean and my professor. I'm stressing and really depressed about this.
2) Yesterday i got critiqued by the class for the second chapter of FREAKS. GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!! I dont know how to win! Everyone on AW, that has read my first few chapters have told me i had way too much background and "Telling"... so i cut that all out, i followed the advice by multiple people to show everything and give away the characters background and stuff through out the whole book...
Then all my reviews said "They didnt connect with the characters" Now this might have been because they didn't read the first chapter, but some that did still had that comment! They told me to add more background and such. SERIOUSLY!?!?! I JUST TOOK THAT ALL OUT!
Just frustrated and upset now.