Teens Writing for Teens, issue 6

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I'm watching Vampire Diaries. I'm starting to get annoyed by the whole Originals killing thing.
 

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Just made a Pick Me Up playlist, to make myself less depressed and I'm rather shocked how much its working.
 

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What's on it? I may need one.

Also, my story notes (including chapter lists) probably wouldn't make sense to a lot of people. XD
 

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What do you mean what is it on? Its just a bunch of songs that lift my spirits.
 

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It's perfect for Hatter. I just hear that voice.

That is a GOOD EPISODE. We had to wait weeks for the next one, though. :(
 

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So I have a question for anyone that sees this:

Has a bully ever said or done anything to make you want to badly hurt them.
 

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Um.

I haven't been bullied since I was just a kid, but I generally want to hurt people all the time. Not for long! I have a very heated, short temper, but I don't hold grudges and am not angry for long.

But this is something you have to decide for your character. Everyone has their own sore spots. For example, if you made a 'your mother' joke to me, I'd just laugh it off or throw one back. "Your momma's so fat her patronus is a cake" is my go-to.

But, if the same person made a 'your mother' joke to Harry Potter, it wouldn't go so well.

Everyone has their own line between what they can tolerate and what makes them snap.
 

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Hmm... I shall have to think and do some mental character convos

ETA: I'm going to bed.
 
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Je suis ici!

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'kay, just got home from dinner. Starting Glee... as soon as the episode finishes, because I RECORDED it! I am smart indeed!

I should be doing homework... but I want to write Sherlockettes... and CAN'T STOP THINKING about MAAH...
 

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'kay, just got home from dinner. Starting Glee... as soon as the episode finishes, because I RECORDED it! I am smart indeed!

I should be doing homework... but I want to write Sherlockettes... and CAN'T STOP THINKING about MAAH...

Message me when you're done! :D This episode is driving me insane.
 

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I hear it's very intense! And that Blaine is annoying. But then, Blaine is always annoying. *sigh*

Nah, I don't mind him THAT much. He's okay, I guess.

Sort of.

I liked him in Season 2! A lot! Season 3, however...
 

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So I have a question for anyone that sees this:

Has a bully ever said or done anything to make you want to badly hurt them.

Yes. Having been brutally bullied for 5 years of my life, yes, i've wanted to kill them, I've wanted them dead, I've wanted them to develop the most painful form of disease known to man. I know that is horrible to think, but they ruined me, they called me so many names had me feel so horrible about myself to the point i wanted to commit suicide that yes, I still hold a grudge, because no matter how many years past, the permanent damage they caused me is still there. My past being bullied is the reason i wrote UZ and in the end of that book, all the bullies die.

So to answer your question, yes, it is completely believable and reasonable for a bullied person to want to hurt there bully, but sadly the truth of the matter is a bullied person would take there own life first before they ever hurt there bully 9 times out of 10. (actually did a paper on this once.)
 

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OH MY GOSH I ACTUALLY LIKE BLAINE.

LOOKIE LOOKIE LOOKIE SEE WHEN THEY HAVE AN ACTUAL STORYLINE GOOD THINGS HAPPEN

LOOK I LIKE THIS

I LIKE THIS CHARACTER
 

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I write so much random stuff in this novel. No idea if this will make it to the second draft, let alone the final one, but damn if it wasn't fun to write.

Once they were around the corner and officially off the school grounds, Danielle rounded on Veronika.

“You smoked weed? From Nikoleta Kostopolous?” Danielle made a loud groaning sound. “Why do I take you anywhere?”

“What’s so special about it coming from her?” asked Sophie.

Danielle took a deep breath. “She—I can’t tell you the whole story, it’s not my story to tell, but she’s got a bit of a reputation, and, regardless, why would you accept an illegal substance from a total stranger? My dad’s the chief of police, I thought I’d taught you better than this!”

“You know,” said Veronika, “it was you who insisted on bringing me to that party.”

“It was younger me!” protested Danielle. “Younger me is a stupid bitch, she messes everything up. If I ever get my hands on the TARDIS, I am going to go have an intervention with that girl.”

“What the hell is a TARDIS?” asked Sophie.

Danielle glared at her in horror. “Sit down, and do not speak in my presence.”

“It’s the time machine from Doctor Who,” replied Veronika.

“Oh,” said Sophie. After a moment, she asked: “What’s Doctor Who?”

Danielle gasped and clutched her chest. “How dare you? How dare you?”

“She is French, you know,” Veronika told her.

Danielle glared at a random point on the horizon. “Damn those French! They’re the sworn enemies of Britain—“

“You don’t have a British bone in your body,” retorted Veronika.

“I reject your reality and replace it with my own,” declared Danielle.

Basically, Danielle is being Danielle.