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Hi Soap!

Yeah, its been awhile. Been way out yonder on that lone-prairie
 

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LOL...I just like girl clowns, I guess. I have a weird bucket list, okay?

I made headway on the Barker story only to realize my narrative is too linear and I'm going to have to change it all around. But that's okay, because I'm making it better.
I had a similar problem. I just rearranged some paragraphs and I think I fixed it.

My main concern is that I think I have too many competing metaphors to support the theme. And I'm not sure about the title.
 
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