Chris:

Your log line: A troubled ancient must reincarnate to save his lover from annihilation, all while uncovering the universes’ best kept secret: God is a deceiver. Now every soul will be annihilated unless he can find the key to survival.


I'm not sure anyone needs to know the ancient is troubled or needs to reincarnate. And saving his lover is the B story.

How about: An ancient being discovers the Universes' deepest secret and thereby dooms the Universe to extinction. He has one chance to stop the doomsday clock.


or: An ancient being discovers the Universes' deepest secret and thereby dooms the Universe to extinction. He has one chance to stop God's doomsday clock.

I like he first one better. Including 'god' seems to be adding one of the twists.

FWIW,

DrDoc