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I'm kicking around an idea for my WIP and can't get an objective hold on it. I'd appreciate comments.
The MC, a PI, learns he was adopted and that his birth father, now deceased, was a famous cat burglar and second story man. His birth mother gives him a manuscript of his father's memoirs, written in prison.
In Robbins' "The Carpetbaggers," he inserts the story of Nevada Smith as a novel within a novel.
I'm considering including the cat burglar's memoirs in my WIP much the same way that Robbins did. What do you think? Contrived device? Lame vehicle? Copycat? Good idea?
I'm not married to the idea, but it has been pestering me. I need to re-read Carpetbaggers (it's been years) to see how Robbins handled it. The movie versions did it as two different and unrelated movies.
The MC, a PI, learns he was adopted and that his birth father, now deceased, was a famous cat burglar and second story man. His birth mother gives him a manuscript of his father's memoirs, written in prison.
In Robbins' "The Carpetbaggers," he inserts the story of Nevada Smith as a novel within a novel.
I'm considering including the cat burglar's memoirs in my WIP much the same way that Robbins did. What do you think? Contrived device? Lame vehicle? Copycat? Good idea?
I'm not married to the idea, but it has been pestering me. I need to re-read Carpetbaggers (it's been years) to see how Robbins handled it. The movie versions did it as two different and unrelated movies.