January 2012 Blog Chain

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And with that the chain comes to an end. If anyone who was bumped would like to make a redemption post, do so now.
 

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Here is my entry:

http://ohno-anotherwritingblog.blogspot.com/2012/01/winter-nightmare.html

This was fun. I'll be commentimg on everyone else's the rest of the week. :)

i tried writing a message on your blog but for some reason it wouldn't let me. So i'll do it here instead :)

Great descriptions. I love imagery like that.

I'm with April though. I want to know more. I'm intrigued and annoyed, and if this was a sample to a larger piece of work then i would be hook line and sinker

Matt (Turndog Millionaire)
 

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i tried writing a message on your blog but for some reason it wouldn't let me. So i'll do it here instead :)

Great descriptions. I love imagery like that.

I'm with April though. I want to know more. I'm intrigued and annoyed, and if this was a sample to a larger piece of work then i would be hook line and sinker

Matt (Turndog Millionaire)

I had a similar problem with some blogs, but I like to say that all of them were excellent.
 

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Hope you feel better! :)
Thank you! I'm at 95%! LOL!

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Originally Posted by These Mean Streets
Here is my entry:

http://ohno-anotherwritingblog.blogs...nightmare.html

This was fun. I'll be commenting on everyone else's the rest of the week. :)


I tried writing a message on your blog but for some reason it wouldn't let me. So I'll do it here instead :)
Ditto!
Making the transition between the unconscious mind and consciousness is something
I'm working on in my WIP.
Good job with this, I was on the edge of my seat.
 

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These Mean Streets

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[FONT=&quot]Thank you for your comments everyone. I don't know why the comments aren't working for some. I have a plain ol' Blogger blog.[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]I appreciate all the comments. I'm afraid though, that in the end, the story was a big fail. I was in a hurry to have it done by 7pm that day and in my edits left out a few lines that I think would've made the story clearer. [/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]It's a self-contained piece. The narrator is having a dream (a winter nightmare) where she is being hunted by forces that wish her ill. In the end, she awakens to realize she is dying from a fatal disease and is under heavy medication. In the end, she lapses back into her nightmare.[/FONT]
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Oh well, better luck next month. :)


[FONT=&quot]If I've missed anyone's blog, I'll be taking care of that today and tomorrow. Thanks again.
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