Teens Writing for Teens, the 5th

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And yeah things work out well... well sort of ok, for my MC's in the end of everything. But alot of people die throughout the series. 2 Siblings, 7 friends, 1 girlfriend, 2 best friends... and that's just as of now. hehehehe. If it needs to be done it needs to be done.

I was thinking of killing off her boyfriend, her fathers old friend, her best friend, and a few other close people.

I'm so mean to her. :(
 

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heheheh i love them so much i cant even drink from them so i put them on my bookshelf for the world to see! They make me smile.

I really dont want to go to class tomorrow. Like i really really dont want to. I'm not going to pay attention anyway... well at least i might get some writing done.... That what i do in a boring meaningless class. So at least i'm being productive!
 

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I was thinking of killing off her boyfriend, her fathers old friend, her best friend, and a few other close people.

I'm so mean to her. :(

I know what you mean. When i killed off a certain character that i cant say because Lisa is reading it.... I cried my freaking eyes out as that person died. I swore never to kill off a main character again... but people need to die. Otherwise its usually not a compelling story... so what did i do instead? Wrote in characters that i wouldn't get attached to because i was going to kill them.

Max... poor poor Max... he ended up killing his own brother. (wasnt technically his fault, he was drugged) Then the love of his life, the girl he was utterly obsessed with since the age of 5 finally goes out with him for a whole year! They were totally in love and looked like the best thing in the world... then i murdered her in cold blood infront of him.... it broke my heart to have to do that to Max but it had to have been done.

It might be mean but it makes for a really good story so kill away!
 

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I know! Haha. But, the reason why is ecause I want them to be so connected to the the character, and then when I kill it off, the throw the book across the room.
 

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It is rather difficult to be meaner to a character than I am to Emil. Especially considering what I've told Ari.

Tay, have you read any?
 

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Today in English class, going over grammar.

Sentence 1: I hid it under my desk.
Sentence 2: I'm sure I've met your girlfriend before.

Boys in my class: OOOOOOOOOOH
Mr. Teacher: Don't be immature.
Boy who we'll call Derek : I'm sure I've met your girlfriend before... UNDER THE BED.
The whole class: HAHAHA that's so funny 'cause it's the word under and stuff.
Girl in class who is smart: Why under the bed? Why not in the bed?
Mr. Teacher: 'Cause Derek is kinky that way.
 

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OMG. HAHAHAHA.

Imma use your technique at least once a day when I write, starting from the next time I write. :D
 

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No WC goal, just writing as much as possible in the day and doing a 'massive session' at least once a day (sometimes I write watching TV).
 

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Today in English class, going over grammar.

Sentence 1: I hid it under my desk.
Sentence 2: I'm sure I've met your girlfriend before.

Boys in my class: OOOOOOOOOOH
Mr. Teacher: Don't be immature.
Boy who we'll call Derek : I'm sure I've met your girlfriend before... UNDER THE BED.
The whole class: HAHAHA that's so funny 'cause it's the word under and stuff.
Girl in class who is smart: Why under the bed? Why not in the bed?
Mr. Teacher: 'Cause Derek is kinky that way.

Epic win. :D
 

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Have either of you heard "Don't You" by Darren Criss? It is so ADORABLE. :D Every time it comes on the Underdogs playlist, I have warm, fuzzy feelings inside. :3

ETA: I am thinking I should have done some world building...
 
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I can't catch it. I am thinking I may need a mouse for that bit.
 

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Trackpad?

I have no idea where the last key scene is going to be set. Fail.
 

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Like, on a laptop, what there is instead of a mouse.

Lisa, stop worrying about that and write.

I second every word of what Tally just said, including the part about the snitch and the trackpad. I actually thought that part would be harder... Unless they've made it more difficult.
 

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Oh, that. Imma just try a mouse.

ETA: Going to bed. 'Night, guys. :)
 
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