Teens Writing for Teens, the 5th

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It goes. Trying to think what to blog about for today.
 

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Cool!

Right now i'm reading over my book and realized a huge somewhat flaw... SHIT!!!
 

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Hey there Para! :D How goes it?

Oh snap, Ally... I hope you can fix it!
 

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Good morning Elu... if it makes you feel better i have been up since 12am

O.O Eek. And I hope the flaw you found isn't too complicated. :)
 

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Yeah so do I... you see i got this idea from an old western i saw. My one MC got grazed with a bullet so they got into a bar to clean the cut with wiskey... but the entire town is empty (other then the monsters) so why whouldnt they just go to a store and get bandades and antiseptic? That was my problem... because the entire scene revoles around them in the bar... when in reality what 13 year old would think of cleaning a wound that way instead of going to a store?
 

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good, just editing... only about 60 pages left of my book! YAY!!!
 

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My cat just decided to bring us the bird she caught as a present. By jumping through the open window with it in her mouth.

And it was still alive. And flying.
 

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nah, not really cutting anything out... Only changed one minor part actually ended up mostly adding rather then subtracting.

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My cat just decided to bring us the bird she caught as a present. By jumping through the open window with it in her mouth.

And it was still alive. And flying.

Oh my.

My cat brought us a mouse the other night... but it was dead. :(
 

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i always wanted a cat... but with these stories i'm rethinking it!
 

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Hahaha, nah, cats are wonderful. :) Really. They do catch things and bring them to you, but it's 'cause they like you!

And if you have an indoor cat, well, problem solved. :)
 

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my boss just baught me pretzle dogs!!! I was so shocked and happy!!!
 

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Hey everyone! It feels like I slept forever, because it's almost one, but it was actually only like eight hours.

How's everybody doing?
 

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Oh yeah, I know. Typically I try to wake up before noon, even when I'm up until four or five. And I'm just taking care of some stuff before settling in to write.
 

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Not right now. School got out almost a month ago, and I haven't found a job yet. So I just stay home and write and sleep and stuff a lot of the time. Or go hang out and play volleyball. Once I finish this I'll really get into the job search, but... I don't need that kind of stress just yet. I need to get rid of some of the stress I already have.
 
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