Editing MAAH.
I still need to figure out how to make Corwin a three-dimensional character.
Give a few more quirks. Corwin seems like the kind of person who is capable of feeling but he keeps his feelings bottled up because of his profession, so play off of that. There is so much you can do with his character, so whatever you decide to do, I'm sure you won't go wrong.
I'm thinking about starting over with my wip. Third person is not easy to write.
I'm generally happiest in third, because I can be more objective about my characters. But some stories are better told in first. It all depends.
Corwin's bottled-upedness will make more sense by the end of Chapter 2.