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Vrooman: If that paragraph you quoted --
No. They would not be interested.
The issue isn't the timeliness of your plot; it's the poor quality of your writing. If that quote is a representative sample, there isn't an editor I know of who would buy your book.
Stop focusing on topicality. Work on improving your sentences.
-- is from the book in question, I can give you a clear and unequivocal answer:"Sure enough, all watched as they observed Ihid sit behind a pillar and open a back pack and remove something. After fiddling with the object Ihid had removed, they saw him lay it down and start to run. They could see Ihid’s face clearly now on the other monitor, a look of fear showed as he ran toward an exit door. But all eyes were fixed on the monitor showing what they now believed to be a bomb exploding and spraying small fragments of contaminated glass on everyone close by. Since these security cameras also picked up sound, not only was the sound of the blast deafening but the screams of those in the food court was frightening."
No. They would not be interested.
The issue isn't the timeliness of your plot; it's the poor quality of your writing. If that quote is a representative sample, there isn't an editor I know of who would buy your book.
Stop focusing on topicality. Work on improving your sentences.