dgaughran
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alex - sent you a PM
I have a 2,000 word short that got no nibbles on a round of submissions. I thought it was solid but perhaps I need a fresh pair of eyes on it, maybe the ending is a little rushed. It's offbeat-ish with an ambiguous twist that could be interpreted as having sci-fi undertones.
Dave
I posted "A Better Tomorrow," a 3000 SF short I'd solicited crits for a few days ago, into the SYW forum. If you'd like to take a look, it's here:
http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=210126
I'll scratch your back and you scratch mineHi Soapdish,
I will take a look at the spec-fic piece if you want more than one crit, but I will be absolutely no help on the poetry (david dot gaughran at gmail)
Dave
OK, I need a beta for two things. One is a 700 word speculative fiction story.
The other is sorta like a poem...but not really. Maybe 100 words? Literary, I think
You can help with one or both.
I especially need help targeting a market for both, after fixing whatever needs to be fixed
I will pm them to anyone who is interested. And I will return the favor too, if needed.
OK, I need a beta for two things. One is a 700 word speculative fiction story.
The other is sorta like a poem...but not really. Maybe 100 words? Literary, I think
I posted a 1,000 word story in the Suddenly Fiction section here (password: flashed). Any and all comments, sweet or sour, are more than welcome.