Critique Circle #2 [Europe Chapter] - 2011+2012 posts archive

Dechef said:

Hai I'm chef and 10 told me to do my best Donald Duck impersonation so (here)

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And would you like to join the crit circle, Chef?

I thought I already did! Though I suppose I could sign up twice, one for me, two for the silly but totally cool over-sized hat.

10trackers said:

And would you like to join the crit circle, Chef?

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Crit bit sent out, y'all

Hi all, I'm hoping to make this, depending on how long a rendezvous takes. It's likely I'll be late though. Sorry - impossible to change this one (involves train and transaction).

So please explain to a complete idiot again: what time will it be in Germany?

Aruna, the Germans don't keep track of time. It's just not important for them.

Seriously: I think it's 4 pm (GMT+1).

ARE YOU GUYS READY TO RRRRRRRRUMBLE?!?!

3pm GMT. Be there.

And here is GMT.

I thought I should let you know beforehand that I'm planning on being there in the chat but that I might be a little late. I have a meeting and it should be over before the chat, but just in case, I'm letting you know

Ehab.Ahmed said:

I thought I should let you know beforehand that I'm planning on being there in the chat but that I might be a little late. I have a meeting and it should be over before the chat, but just in case, I'm letting you know

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WHAT.


...okay

help! can't enter chatzilla

aruna said:

help! can't enter chatzilla

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Oops And Derek is not here!

Try Mibbit? I'll find you the link

OK I got into mibbit but I don.t see any of you guys -- a couple others but not you. weeps

Alternatively, you could use the regular link in Mac's post about chat.

aruna said:

OK I got into mibbit but I don.t see any of you guys -- a couple others but not you. weeps

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Which channel are you in?

Sorry I missed today: the train was late and at least the transaction was successful (finally sold my car!). Will send crit separately next week.

Hey, gang. Hope last night's session went well! Sorry I missed it.

Just letting you all know: I need to go on hiatus for a bit to sort out some personal issues. However, please keep me in the loop.

Miss you guys and crit sessions. Hope to back soon!

Cheers,
Snitch.

Sorry I missed it guys, the meeting was over right before the chat, but the traffic was a nightmare. Terribly sorry.

Hope everything's well with you, Snitchcat.

Who's next ???

Ton raises a valid question, guys! Who has something ready for us to tear to shreds?

Come on! Be brave!

I've got plenty of chapters, but I'd love to bring my first chapter back (quite short - could provide additional chapter) for feedback about how to improve it. It's been rejected by an agent who said she likes the concept of the novel, but didn't care enough about the main character to keep reading. I need to make her character more loveable/intriguing/interesting/attractive in general.

It's not quite the usual crit, so if anyone has anything else to offer, over to them!

I have a chapter, but since I'm new, I can go whenever it suits of course.