I'd written off a submission, too. I wish I'd received a form R just now. But no, the agent obviously hates my NF writing, whatever approach I take, and wanted to let me know in rather blunt terms. (He's seen earlier versions. Maybe he wants to make sure I don't approach him again. However, I already told him this was my last shot with him.) He's never told me what he wants, just that I haven't provided it...with a few cutting adjectives for good measure.
Ho ho ho.
This makes me want to be a success, just to prove him wrong. I hope he's wrong. If he isn't, it isn't anything I can fix because I don't see what the problem is. (My betas all liked my writing, for what that's worth.)
Ho ho ho.
This makes me want to be a success, just to prove him wrong. I hope he's wrong. If he isn't, it isn't anything I can fix because I don't see what the problem is. (My betas all liked my writing, for what that's worth.)