Hi all -
I have a question for which I haven't been able to find a satisfactory answer.
It involves one of our members, Sissybaby.
Back in the spring of last year, there was a "hook the agent" contest on a blog -- Miss Snark's First Victim. My wonderful beta reader, Sissybaby, emailed me and told me she was told she couldn't make Mom and Dad proper names in her MS, because they weren't proper names. This is what the agent had said in response to her submission. In fact, it was the main reason she decided not to read further. At the time, I didn't understand why an agent would say that because I had learned if mom is preceeded by a pronoun, it's not capped. If it represents a name, it is capped.
For example:
Gerald's mom didn't argue.
Or
When she heard him out, Mom didn't argue.
Today, while reading through the blog that Sissybaby had posted on, I found the submission. I read and reread the agent's response. At first, I was totally confused. WTF? I did research on the internet and all the pages I found said I was correct.
Finally, it dawned on me. What this agent meant is if you are writing in 3rd person, you can't make Mom and Dad proper names because the narrator isn't your protag, the narrator is YOU. And the narrator's mom and dad are not your mom and dad. I think what she's saying is that in third person, you have to say "his mom" or "her dad". If you write in first person, then the narrator is the protag, so it's okay to cap Mom and Dad.
This means I have to go back through my MUCH edited novel and add a bunch of "his mom's" to replace Mom. Seems like a strange new rule. But, oh well! Nobody said this would be easy.
Any comments would be appreciated --
Irene
I have a question for which I haven't been able to find a satisfactory answer.
It involves one of our members, Sissybaby.
Back in the spring of last year, there was a "hook the agent" contest on a blog -- Miss Snark's First Victim. My wonderful beta reader, Sissybaby, emailed me and told me she was told she couldn't make Mom and Dad proper names in her MS, because they weren't proper names. This is what the agent had said in response to her submission. In fact, it was the main reason she decided not to read further. At the time, I didn't understand why an agent would say that because I had learned if mom is preceeded by a pronoun, it's not capped. If it represents a name, it is capped.
For example:
Gerald's mom didn't argue.
Or
When she heard him out, Mom didn't argue.
Today, while reading through the blog that Sissybaby had posted on, I found the submission. I read and reread the agent's response. At first, I was totally confused. WTF? I did research on the internet and all the pages I found said I was correct.
Finally, it dawned on me. What this agent meant is if you are writing in 3rd person, you can't make Mom and Dad proper names because the narrator isn't your protag, the narrator is YOU. And the narrator's mom and dad are not your mom and dad. I think what she's saying is that in third person, you have to say "his mom" or "her dad". If you write in first person, then the narrator is the protag, so it's okay to cap Mom and Dad.
This means I have to go back through my MUCH edited novel and add a bunch of "his mom's" to replace Mom. Seems like a strange new rule. But, oh well! Nobody said this would be easy.
Any comments would be appreciated --
Irene