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Seeking beta reader for realistic/multicultural MG

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CharleyGirl

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Seeking beta- realistic/multicultural MG

Does anyone have the time/interest to be a beta reader for my 34,000-word middle grade novel, THE PIZARRO/GREENFIELD WAR? A school project, a mysterious figure, and broken cultures form the premise. It's a contemporary story that has historical/multicultural elements.

I'm looking for honest advice/feedback about plot, character development (or lack thereof), pacing, grammar, and anything else you might throw my way. I have no problem with criticism-- I embrace any and all comments. I could REALLY use the help--I feel like it could be improved a lot with the critical eyes of the great people at AW!


I'm pretty new to writing, and I would love the feedback of anyone willing to lend an eye or two.

Feel free to PM me for more information. Thanks!
 
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