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Hi everyone,
I'm new here, so I hope this is the right area to ask my question...
I'm writing an article for kids in military families. I'm writing in the 2nd person, and referring to the reader's parent who is currently deployed.
I'm not sure how to refer to this person?
"your parent"
"your mum or dad"
"your loved one"
I prefer saying "mum or dad", because it's more personal and reflects the target child's language. Saying "loved one" (to me) sounds like a psych text book, and "parent" is quite detacted. However when using the term "mum or dad" many times, it becomes repetative and annoying to read. I want it to be generic for all services, so can't use something gender neutral like "solider".
Any suggestions welcome...
I'm new here, so I hope this is the right area to ask my question...
I'm writing an article for kids in military families. I'm writing in the 2nd person, and referring to the reader's parent who is currently deployed.
I'm not sure how to refer to this person?
"your parent"
"your mum or dad"
"your loved one"
I prefer saying "mum or dad", because it's more personal and reflects the target child's language. Saying "loved one" (to me) sounds like a psych text book, and "parent" is quite detacted. However when using the term "mum or dad" many times, it becomes repetative and annoying to read. I want it to be generic for all services, so can't use something gender neutral like "solider".
Any suggestions welcome...