Ahhhhh you do what I do when I read. I'm always comparing myself or analyzing my writing style taking mental notes when I read a published novel. It's hard for me to turn that off. FWIW I think you do a great job with your lead characters. *high fives*
Awww, thank you~~
But yeah, I'm always comparing and analyzing when reading. I get ideas for my work while reading other novels all the time. But when a bad read comes along and all I want to do is complain about it, I wonder how oblivious I am to my own shortcomings. I'm esp sensitive when reading and writing female characters.
Not that a zillion fans on goodreads didn't adore Darker Shade, some went ape for it. So a good novel is also in the eye of the beholder I guess.