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I'd papercut everyone who posted in this thread with my Penguin Classics 99p copy of Jane Eyre, but it's bedtime, so BAI!
Based on Wikipedia, every book uses a deus ex machina as the climax, which disgusts me even more than the fact that these books appear to be comprised primarily of werewolf pornography.
Apparently she changed her mind about handing over her "baby," because one year later her publicist announces on the LKH Amazon page that there would be a TV series.
So is it in book seven that Anita's crotch took over the keyboard?
me from elsewhere said:This was an extremely difficult book to read. It might be a good book, but it's too annoying to read and enjoy in its raw state; the clumsy editing is enough to violate the tacit trust a reader needs to have in an author. There's an editing error on almost every single page, and that's a problem with the publisher, not the writer.
Now, I've noticed that Hamilton's books are poorly copy edited in general. I expect things like "alright" for "all right," and "midmorning" for "mid morning," but in this book we have, more than once, diety for deity, ardeur spelled in a number of interesting ways, Damian as Domain, and Damain, sauve for suave, put for but (a dyslexic marker, which makes me wonder), libility for liability, particliar for particular, hoptial for hospital, retch and wretch are confused (and, like discreet and discrete, not for the first time in one of Hamilton's books), and a cornucopia of continuity errors, and contradictions of facts presented in previous books.
The grammar is, well . . . let's just say I'm used to reading the work of under prepared freshmen, and even they aren't this bad. Even the grammar and style checker in Microsoft Word will catch its/it's and you're/your, and would of/would have errors. Was there an editor involved? I'm talking about comma splices, and not just in dialogue, commas sprinkled as if they were a seasoning, apostrophes in plurals, and not in possessives, sentence fragments, and Hamilton's long-term problems with irregular verbs, especially lay and lie. We'll skip the creative use of French and German.
Incubus Dreams desperately needs a decent line editor--Hamilton's developed a number of repetitive nervous twitches in her writing, including repeating descriptions verbatim (not only from previous books, but repeating them in this book) like frequently repeating that only new vampires flash fang. Limit this kind of reference to once per book--that way, you clue in new readers, but you don't annoy them. I'd guess that at least 25% of this book could, and should, have been cut. A good editor could have really made something interesting out of Incubus Dreams. Right now, it's a mess.
If I hadn't seen this kind of sloppy editing and writing in previous books, I'd blame overly rapid typesetting and a rush to market, but this is just too awful to find any excuse for it, even that one. And I can't even hope that the errors will be corrected in the paperback, based on previous books.
I won't be reading any more.
And you didn't even touch on the plot and character issues. .
Apparently she changed her mind about handing over her "baby," because one year later her publicist announces on the LKH Amazon page that there would be a TV series.
My guess is that Twilight blew her illusion of market supremacy. If she had really deluded herself into thinking that her books were the end all - be all of vampire fiction, seeing Edward on a Doritos bag must have been a world changer.
Who has more money anyway-LKH or Meyer? (I'm not throwing J.K. Rowling into the equation because I suspect she has more money than the Vatican.)
Even if they're on par, it took LKH 18 books to do what Smeyer did in 4.
True. Who knows? Maybe LKH will start writing YA stuff.
There are now more than 6 million copies of Anita in print worldwide ...
I read the reviews on Amazon, and the consensus seems to lean so heavily in the category of, "I'm never reading another one" that it's almost hard to believe that they're selling better now than they once were.
Well there's always the "it's like watching a train wreck - I have to read the next one to see if Anita peddles her ass on third avenue or opens a swingers club or something" market.
I think once the pedophilia storyline was publicized after Skin Trade hit the shelves, the train was officially wrecked.
I haven't read it, but apparently, Anita has an encounter with an underaged (teenage, but still not legal) boy... but it's "not her fault" because she's "forced" to do it or die.
This was one of those "If you don't like it, you're a prude" moments on her blog.