13762- Hi, Harry. I read your story of the boy at the railroad station. I liked the setting, and I think it's a great story idea. You just had so many crits on it already, that I didn't really have anything to add...but I liked it.
13775- no problem, David. It was an interesting read. Very detailed and original. Those were just my thoughts, btw, that I left there, take 'em or leave 'em- other people have other thoughts. I forgot to say that I liked all of the eyes...yes, I did.
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