Here's the deal. Recently I entered a query contest. In the contest, other writers (also looking for agents) and one agent assistant, critique the query. 90% of the comments for my query were negative, and the agent's assistant stated that she was "not hooked," and gave some feedback.
Here's where it gets complicated.
Thus far, I have only sent out 8 query letters. My stats are as follows:
4 rejections
2 pending
1 partial request
1 full manuscript request
My problem is, I'm not sure if I should revise my query. On the one hand, I've been given a lot of critical advice. On the other hand I've gotten 2 requests for materials out of 8 submissions.
Are these stats good? Or are two requests merely flukes, and I should be shooting for a higher percentage of requests?
My worry is that if I mess with the query, I might make it worse. And since I've had requests, my thinking was that it must be okay.
Thoughts? Advice?
Thanks so much.
Here's where it gets complicated.
Thus far, I have only sent out 8 query letters. My stats are as follows:
4 rejections
2 pending
1 partial request
1 full manuscript request
My problem is, I'm not sure if I should revise my query. On the one hand, I've been given a lot of critical advice. On the other hand I've gotten 2 requests for materials out of 8 submissions.
Are these stats good? Or are two requests merely flukes, and I should be shooting for a higher percentage of requests?
My worry is that if I mess with the query, I might make it worse. And since I've had requests, my thinking was that it must be okay.
Thoughts? Advice?
Thanks so much.