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Is it cliché or unwise to open my novel up with the death of the MC's mother? It's where the story truly begins as she is telling her daughter she is sorry for all the secrets she's kept from her regarding the identity of her father.
Of course, I'm making sure she's not saying all of this as she's taking her last breath because I know that is cliché and unrealistic (most people do not engage in such conversations as they are struggling in their last moments). When she does tell her daughter of the "secrets" it's very vague and it comes some hours or so before her death (I don't actually detail the death itself).
Anyway, should I stick with this or try and come up with another beginning? I want to jump right into the story and this is the only thing that's coming to mind.
Of course, I'm making sure she's not saying all of this as she's taking her last breath because I know that is cliché and unrealistic (most people do not engage in such conversations as they are struggling in their last moments). When she does tell her daughter of the "secrets" it's very vague and it comes some hours or so before her death (I don't actually detail the death itself).
Anyway, should I stick with this or try and come up with another beginning? I want to jump right into the story and this is the only thing that's coming to mind.