Steve, love the pitch! I really think you're going to do well with a historical fantasy set in Spain. I mean, that kicks ass. (Was that too positive? Sorry.)
Damn. Now I want to go work on the pitch for my WIP instead of writing my WIP.
Damn. Now I want to go work on the pitch for my WIP instead of writing my WIP.
This.IMHO QLH is great for people who don't already have writing friends to bounce their query off of. But the down side is sometimes too many people can chime in, leading one to endlessly tweak and re-tweak their query. At least, that's what happened to me when I went there. For me the opinions of 4 or 5 different people (who give good feedback) is more than enough.