I have the following bit of dialogue in my manuscript:
“Why did you leave that job?” I asked him. “It couldn't be the money. University salaries are pretty much equal across the board.”
“Here, it was a little bit more money, and little bit less meetings.”
My agent wants me to make the last line "more of a zinger." Any ideas? Help?
Thanks thanks thanks!
“Why did you leave that job?” I asked him. “It couldn't be the money. University salaries are pretty much equal across the board.”
“Here, it was a little bit more money, and little bit less meetings.”
My agent wants me to make the last line "more of a zinger." Any ideas? Help?
Thanks thanks thanks!