If the first pages of your manuscript are any indication, I'm going to like your work. You have that elusive thing called a "voice," which, along with a plot of course, is crucial for a commercial sale.
Before I ask you to send the manuscript, though, I'd like to know how old you are. If you're not yet 18 years old, or emancipated for some reason, we'll need to get one of your parents involved in any of our business dealings from the beginning. It's no problem, from my perspective, but it's necessary. Fill in the picture for me. Send me a brief bio and a couple of links to your best pieces for (Newspaper I work for), and we'll take it from there.
Best regards,
Robin