That's pretty good honeycomb! See you did it! Love the bit about the dimples!
One thing I would maybe correct, instead of diamond shaped, maybe you want to say "sqaure jaw". Picture the actual shape of a diamond, it ends in a point goes up at the sides and then meets at a point at the top again. Look at Brad's face. His chin has a point and the sides rise a little to the jaw, but then you have straight lines going up the side of his face and then straight across at the top. A diamond shaped face would mean his head was pointy, and his chin up to his ears would be V shaped. "Square jaw" is kind of boring, a usual description, but it actually is what he has when you look at the jaw line. It is also acceptable as an attractive description, people automatically think that the guy is attractive when you describe them with a "square jaw".
Anyway, that's my suggestion, but well done on the rest! Congrats!