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Adverbs give flavor to dull verbs. They also lard sentences with unnecessary words: Why use dull verbs that have to be fleshed out with adverbs when you can just use more evocative and interesting verbs? Sentences without adverbs are punchier -- shorter and less complicated. Adverbs, especially when used serially and successively all in one clause, can make sentences feel flabby and overly complicated.What are some of the effects of using adverbs?
You might want a flabbier, adverb-laden sentence every once in a while to mix things up, and/or if you want to slow down the reader for a moment -- perhaps to let something sink in, create a particular rhythm, or give emphasis to a particular aspect of a verb (though this only works if you use adverbs rarely).In what situations do you want those effects?
If you don't want to bore or annoy the reader with flabby, complicated sentences composed of dull verbs that need flavor additives.In what situations do you want to avoid those effects?
Use a stronger verb instead of a dull verb + adverb combo. e.g.:What are some alternative ways to achieve those effects? Give examples.
If you don't change the verbs too then you might end up with undescriptive sentences that don't sufficiently paint an image for the reader.What are some effects of omitting or deleting adverbs?
Another problem is that it's lazy writing.
Not only I agree with this but I also confess every time I'm writing in a hurry I resort to adverbs and adjectives (the other crutch). 'She stared angrily' is way easier and faster to write than a proper sentence that shows, not tells. Of course these sentences will have to go away in later drafts.Another problem is that it's lazy writing.
Another problem is that it's lazy writing.
Use a stronger verb instead of a dull verb + adverb combo. e.g.:
The man ran quickly.
vs
The man sprinted.
The man dashed.
The man darted.
The man quickly sprinted down the street.
The man sprinted down the street quickly.
Why not?
How do you sprint, other than "quickly"?
I never saw anybody sprint "slowly" . . . no, wait a minute . . . I was on a very bad track team in college . . . but that's a digression.
caw
Sprinting, by its very definition, is a quick activity. Even if it's quicker than expected, it's still quick, so the adverb would always be redundant.
Actually, comparatives like your sentence above are good examples of when adverbs are sometimes necessary. When you are comparing two things and saying one is more or less or equal to the other in some respect, then either you have to use an adjective or an adverb. I can't say why at the moment (because I haven't figured it out), but sometimes it seems only an adjective will fit and sometimes only an adverb will fit. e.g.I do not entirely disagree (am I allowed to say "meh" yet, or do I have to wait for Collins?), but riddle me this:
What's the difference between saying:
"He sprinted quickly."
and
"This is a big elephant."
Is it that "big" is not part of the definition of "elephant", just a relation between the elephant and the assessing human?
I mean there are big elephents and small elephants, just as there are small mice and big mice. And a big mouse, hopefully, is smaller than a small elephant.
So what's so strange about "quick sprints" and "slow sprints" (or by extension "sprinting quickly" and "sprinting slowly")?
I do hope you folks don't disagree with my use of "quickly" in:
"The man didn't sprint as quickly as the cheetah!"
[I wish I could think of a good context, or a similar practical example... it's always hard to talk abstractly, that makes us wish to apply more logic than language actually supports... ]
Redundant but emphatic. Or perhaps there's a suggestion of "quicker than expected". It's a context thing. There may not be many contexts that support the sentence. I'm aware that's not a very satisfactory answer. And adverbs that are clearly non-redundant make for better examples anyway. Still...
What's the difference between saying:
"He sprinted quickly."
and
"This is a big elephant."
So what's so strange about "quick sprints" and "slow sprints" (or by extension "sprinting quickly" and "sprinting slowly")?
I do hope you folks don't disagree with my use of "quickly" in:
"The man didn't sprint as quickly as the cheetah!"
Maestrowork said:It already means "run really fast" so a "slow sprint" doesn't make sense -- that would be a jog.
A sprint is a type of run. Compared to other runs, a sprint is quick. (Dashes are quicker?) But if you add "quick" to "sprint", apparantly no frameshift occurs. You're not comparing sprints. Why?
Phew, for a moment I was worried about the comparisons...
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While I do see a difference between "small elephants" and "slow sprints" in acceptability, I still can't put my finger on it. None of the posts above have managed to provide "convincing" reasons.
See:
An elephant is an animal. Compared to other animals, elephants are big. (Whales are bigger.) But if you add the descriptor "big" to "animal", you get a frame shift: that is, you're now comparing elephants to elephants, not elephants to other animals.
A sprint is a type of run. Compared to other runs, a sprint is quick. (Dashes are quicker?) But if you add "quick" to "sprint", apparantly no frameshift occurs. You're not comparing sprints. Why?
Actually no. A jog and a sprint have decidedly different body postures. Even an incredibly slow sprint (like a person caught in slow motion for some inexplicable reason) would be recognisable as a sprint. Even if you overtake them ambling. (You would wonder wtf is going on, though.)
So in the end, yes, that there is no such thing as a "slow sprint" is indeed strange. Is it that we can't perceive the range with our mere eyes?
maestrowork said:You're just trying to argue for argument's sake.