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One of the MCs hides relevant information they know about one of the big mysteries of the book so that when it's revealed at the very end, it can shock you. The idea that this character would never think about that information while thinking about the situation is ridiculous.
That sounds like the revelation about 1/3rd of the way into Evernight. Suddenly the MC is like "oh yeah, so this <huge thing I didn't tell you>." And that made me distrust everything she thought/said/did from then on. Didn't like >.>