"You're hunting."
(That's not my current WIP, but I already posted the first line from that in another thread.)
Now, quick! Turn this thread into a discussion about first lines, before some overze--I mean, respectable and fast-thinking mod ports this thread to the desert that is Writing Prompts & Games...
I started this particular novel with a line of dialogue. With no tag! Gasp! That's against the "rules". But I think sometimes, it works.
From here on, maybe we could post our first lines along with an explanation of why we think it works (or doesn't). Explain what the payoff will be for the reader to stay with the story, and why your first line hints at that payoff. What say ye?
I think this works because it poses questions. Who's hunting? Hunting what? And, hopefully, it hints that something's going to happen really soon (which, indeed, it does).