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ZannaPerry
09-29-2007, 09:10 AM
In my current WIP my hero is a boxer with a lot of tattoos all over his body, mainly his back and shoulders. . . well, I have that he has a tattoo of his wife's lips on the back of his neck, and it stands alone from the others...

Is that corny???

Stacia Kane
09-29-2007, 01:57 PM
Actually that's pretty hot, in a trashy kind if way.

Voyager
09-29-2007, 02:12 PM
That is rather sexay, although, I'd go trashier and put em somewhere closer to the danglybitual region (a technical term)....but that's just me :D

ZannaPerry
09-29-2007, 09:05 PM
Ha! I wasn't expecting your answers. I guess it sounds hot in a way. Voyager, I am not putting it down there. :D

Jersey Chick
09-29-2007, 09:17 PM
I like the phrase danglibitual region :D

And I agree - hot, in a trashy sorta way :D

sunandshadow
09-30-2007, 12:48 AM
*ponders how you would tell whose lips the tattoo was from* Personally I'd make the tattoo a lipstick print rather than actual lips.

veinglory
09-30-2007, 02:56 AM
I imagined that's basically what it was, using the right ink it could be tattooed over an actual impression. I find that quite realistic as the toughtest guys will get tattooed with their kids baby photos, mother name etc. They have a sentimenal side too even if it means they can have something needled into their skin that they would never say in words. :)

Thump
09-30-2007, 03:10 AM
A kissy tat in the neck on a boxer would be sexy to the ladies but very visible when he's in his boxers boxing. I'm just saying, in case it might be something he doesn't want the other guys to see.

But yeah, kinda hot.

ZannaPerry
09-30-2007, 03:59 AM
What I was going for with the kiss tattoo of his wife's lips would be a fairly light pink color directly behind his neck. The top of his spine. The best part you love to grab on a guy when you're ready to kiss him.

Since in my story his wife is dead the tattoo forever engraved on his skin would be a reminder of what they "once" had because it was the very first tattoo he ever got. Now his back and shoulders are practically covered with them but the kiss stands alone among the others. Definitely the most femine one. It's a memory tattoo. :)

brokenfingers
09-30-2007, 04:03 AM
I think it's cool. As has been said, outside the ring, boxers have the same emotions as others and are quite passionate so it wouldn't be corny at all for one to have his dead wife's lips tattooed on.

kristie911
09-30-2007, 07:03 AM
I think it's an excellent idea! Very, very sexy!

Voyager
09-30-2007, 07:08 AM
Ha! I wasn't expecting your answers. I guess it sounds hot in a way. Voyager, I am not putting it down there. :D


Killjoy :tongue

The_Grand_Duchess
10-01-2007, 02:03 AM
What I was going for with the kiss tattoo of his wife's lips would be a fairly light pink color directly behind his neck. The top of his spine. The best part you love to grab on a guy when you're ready to kiss him.

Since in my story his wife is dead the tattoo forever engraved on his skin would be a reminder of what they "once" had because it was the very first tattoo he ever got. Now his back and shoulders are practically covered with them but the kiss stands alone among the others. Definitely the most femine one. It's a memory tattoo. :)

I wasn't for it at first becuase I thought it was cliche but then I read the above and now I'm all for it. It's very sexy.

JoNightshade
10-01-2007, 02:06 AM
What I was going for with the kiss tattoo of his wife's lips would be a fairly light pink color directly behind his neck. The top of his spine. The best part you love to grab on a guy when you're ready to kiss him.

I'm sorry to inform you that you've got it all wrong. The best part is right under the ear. ;)

ZannaPerry
10-01-2007, 03:42 AM
Sure, sure, Jo. All different kinds of women love different parts on the male body. Mine happens to be the neck. Well, to grab it at least. :D

Soccer Mom
10-02-2007, 01:01 AM
What an interesting idea. It's sexy and sweet at the same time.

Jeff Colburn
10-02-2007, 11:41 AM
I think the tat is a great idea. Just watch the tattoo TV shows and you'll see that anything goes. But the lip tat is both erotic and sentimental.

Have Fun,
Jeff

ZannaPerry
10-03-2007, 01:45 AM
So glad to hear it! :D Thank you everyone!

Sunkissed27f
10-03-2007, 01:52 AM
Why not? If they can put bare nakkid ladies on their arms...what's so bad with hot lips on their necks?