Beta Reader needed for my WIP...

[Paragon83]

Hello everyone!

I am in need of somebody who can give me a critique on the story I am currently working on. It is written in a stageplay/screenplay type of format, for no particular reason, it's just that when I thought the story up I ended up writing it that way. This is the first story I've ever written so any type of criticism would be extremely helpful and informative. The story itself is something of a political fiction with the main focus being on the characters, their personalities, perspectives, decisions, choices, etc.. What they are actually "doing" in the story serves more as a background element, although it's important as well. If any one is interested just let me know, it would be much appreciated.

[alleycat]

Hi, Paragon.

I see you're new here. Welcome.

Do you know that there's a special critique forum here for various types of work and genres? It's called Share Your Work and you can find it on the main forum page. You have to enter a password; it's vista.

[Paragon83]

Oh, okay. Thanks! Sorry about the mistake.

[katiemac]

Not a mistake at all, Paragon! Share Your Work is great for multiple feedbacks on an excerpt or shorter piece of work. If you still want a beta reader, someone to read for you a little more long-term, then posting here is a good way to find someone.