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three seven
02-03-2005, 08:49 PM
Ok, a little story, the point of which I'm sure will come to me.

About ten years ago, following the fiery assassination of my first novel, I suffered a loss of motivation followed by a period of child-rearing, career building and so on. I didn't write for seven years, though throughout that time I had stories whizzing around my head. I found inspiration everywhere I looked, but I found excuse after excuse not to sit down and start typing.

In the summer of 2001, everything seemed to fall into place and I sat down and banged out an opening chapter. And then I blocked up and failed to write anything significant for another three years. However, I spent that time developing my characters to the point where I knew them better than they knew themselves.

A couple of weeks ago, enough was enough. It all sprang into place again and I sat down to write. Another fresh start. It seemed to be going desperately slowly. Some days I'd just sit and stare blankly at the screen, knowing what I was trying to say but finding no way of getting it down. I typed my lead character's name and even that sounded wrong. The actions and feelings I was managing to get down felt like those of someone I didn't know at all. And then I realised what was happening: The person I was describing was not the character I'd had sitting in my head for the last six or seven years, but a completely different person altogether. No wonder I couldn't write - I was trying to force her to do and feel things that she simply didn't want to.
'So who the hell are you?' I said. Now I know that a lot of people fill out questionnaires and whatnot for their characters, while I find it easier to do a little Photoshop montage that defines their personalities. Just the way my mind works, visually. Within minutes, and with no conscious creative input from me, I was staring at a whole new personality.

I've never forgotten the feeling I had ten years ago when, about half way through my first book, it started to write itself faster than I could type it. The excitement and anticipation of not knowing where it was leading or what was going to happen to those people was nervewracking to say the least, and now I'm feeling it again! All of my plans, and most of what I thought I knew have flown out of the window and I've never felt better about writing than I do today.

Well anyway, I hope at least something I've said makes sense to someone, somewhere. And to anyone who isn't bored to tears by now, you've been a wonderful audience and I'm here all week.

ElizabethJames
02-03-2005, 09:05 PM
Very inspiring . . . and familiar. One of our characters changed into a woman right before our very eyes. She must have known she was a boring man, because she absolutely insisted.

So fun having you here.

Trapped in amber
02-03-2005, 09:09 PM
Yep, sometimes you're struggling away, churning out the million words of manure, and then zip, something clicks and smoke trails form over the keyboard, sleep suffers, and things write themselves. I wish I had more control so it happened at convenient times.

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Coco82
02-03-2005, 09:51 PM
Great story first of all. I've got kind of the same thing. I've got a rough idea of where the story is headed and I'm following that, but I'm letting the vstory flush out its own details.

katdad
02-03-2005, 10:23 PM
Although I have not been 'blocked' as you were, I did have the problems with writing in general.

I also tried to force my characters to "do things" -- I liken this to making them perform like marionettes on a string.

Then I learned. I worked hard at creating 3-dimensional characters in my mind (and in notes). These characters had personalities, likes & dislikes, failings and good points.

Then I set them into a plot or situation, and simply "recorded" what happened. I was taking dictation, or was shooting a live-action documentary.

After I made this change, I've been able to write extensively at the drop of a hat. (swish)

Nateskate
02-03-2005, 10:29 PM
It takes so much discipline and understanding to publish. That's why I think stories like yours are so common.

I seriously considered attempting to publish in the early 1980s. I actually wrote several fairly good stories, but since I had no typing skills, they went into my closet, awaiting the moment when I had the money to pay for someone to type them up. Children, and bills, and many years later, those stories never saw the light of day.

But I never completely stopped writing. Instead I wrote fanciful stories for people at work, and as gifts. Then with the computer, my job forced me to learn to type. Still, it was a number of years before I had any motivation to attempt another novel.

I hope you find success, and that it was well worth the wait.

three seven
02-04-2005, 03:54 AM
Kind and encouraging words. Thank you.
:smokin

snarzler
02-04-2005, 09:23 PM
This is the reason my office is a converted porch. The windows are sealed and the doors and shag carpet are heavy.

I sit down and with my eyes closed in front of the keyboard and microphone, I talk and type.

I don't look at what I type. (I was taught by a ruler-carrying nun and a gray panel over my fingers to touch type.) I just go. I also do voices and make noises to let my brain go and not worry about my fingers keeping up.

I let the voices in my head guide me. Some characters are Athena-full-grown-from-the-head-of-Zeus/Andrea, others are Janitor-with-big-clue-dude.

This gets the whole Very Rough 'first' draft out. I print it out, add the notes from the tape, and make other corrections (unlike Travis Tea, I note if people change sexes and races). With that 'real first' draft, I commence editing.

It might not be The Right Way, but its how I keep the nets and backward white jackets on the other side of the doors.
For today.

Andrea 0]

RGame
02-05-2005, 09:08 AM
Since this is about writing over the long haul, this might be the best place to ask this question: How long had you guys been writing before you finished your first novel?

I started writing 15 years ago next month. I've written on and off since then, totalling close to 100 short stories, but I've never gotten past 50 pages of a novel. I must have had close to ten tries at one. My problem is usually that I just don't have enough story to fill a novel.

Short stories were a lot easier. You just need one good idea, usually. But I've gotten to a point where short stories don't do it for me anymore and I don't care if I ever write another one. A novel is my only goal now.

I'm on chapter 4 of my latest attempt, and I'm hoping this forum keeps me motivated to actually finish it.

wurdwise
02-05-2005, 09:14 AM
My first novel will be finished June 1st. One month more and it will have taken two years to write it. But that was with a few months break, and I also write freelance. If you need motivation, you ought to join the Weekend Progress Report in the Humor Writing Section. Barbara got me motivated with just the threat of the taser!:eek