Which of the following is correct?
"The marsh water-flooded cave stank of decay." OR "The marsh-water-flooded cave stank of decay."
"The marsh water-flooded cave stank of decay." OR "The marsh-water-flooded cave stank of decay."
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The second.
Or, better, "The cave, flooded by marsh water, stank of decay." Or, maybe better yet, "Flooded by marsh water, the cave stank of decay."
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As you've just discovered, a long string of adjectives is often confusing and unwieldy. Break it up, as Ken suggested.
Of the two, I'd prefer #3. "The marsh-water flooded cave stank of decay."
Of the 3, I'd prefer you broke it up like they suggested
Feel free to ignore me, though.
Of the 3, I'd prefer you broke it up like they suggested
Feel free to ignore me, though.
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Breaking it up is definitely better. Otherwise I'd use one hyphen and put it between marsh and water.
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