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Prosperity7
01-13-2007, 10:55 PM
I'm hoping that it will make it easier for people to comment by offering part of the actual story.

I posted Chapter One "Prey for Daddy" in the Share Your Work Forum under the Religious Writing Sub-Forum.

My thread is entitled "Please review and comment on Chapter One "Prey for Daddy" of my book (http://absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=51843)."

I ask all those interested to please read it and post whatever comments, suggestions and corrections you deem necessary.

Thank you in advance for your time.

David:D

Higgins
01-15-2007, 08:47 PM
I'm hoping that it will make it easier for people to comment by offering part of the actual story.

I posted Chapter One "Prey for Daddy" in the Share Your Work Forum under the Religious Writing Sub-Forum.

My thread is entitled "Please review and comment on Chapter One "Prey for Daddy" of my book (http://absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=51843)."

I ask all those interested to please read it and post whatever comments, suggestions and corrections you deem necessary.

Thank you in advance for your time.

David:D


Predatory Dad, ik.