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Blarg
09-16-2011, 10:20 AM
Dense night
congeals; shadows
shake each other awake,
passing the baton of secrets,
running.
B.D. Eyeslie
09-16-2011, 05:54 PM
running
with stick figures,
flying down Heartbreak Hill,
passing the truly lethargic
parked cars.
CDSinex
09-16-2011, 11:04 PM
Parked cars
by the dozen
wait by the neighbor’s house.
The old man had been sick, I guess
he’s gone.
B.D. Eyeslie
09-17-2011, 04:49 AM
He's gone.
Sparking the rail,
riding clouds of glory,
Skateboarding with a clip-on tie
Far out.
celestialwolf
09-17-2011, 06:43 AM
Far out.
Like, no way man!
How about a snack, Scoob?
Zoinks! Scooby old buddy, old pal-
Like, help!
B.D. Eyeslie
09-18-2011, 11:12 PM
Like help,
nonexistent
night watchmen never came,
playing poker in the guard shack
instead.
JohnL
09-19-2011, 02:20 AM
"Instead."
A latch click door
lock secures your anti-
climactic antecedent: "I
chose him..."
B.D. Eyeslie
09-19-2011, 04:07 PM
Chose him!
I do not care.
You've been too much trouble
for me to lose any sleep over--
I'm lost.
kdnxdr
09-19-2011, 08:40 PM
i'm lost
out in blank space
searching for the right word,
the one that anchors me to you,
like "love"
CDSinex
09-20-2011, 12:38 PM
"Like love?"
The question’s asked,
and often asked again.
The answer’s kept within these lips.
Hush now.
B.D. Eyeslie
09-20-2011, 06:23 PM
Hush now.
The camp fire dims,
and our voices mellow.
Creatures of the woods have captured
the night.
kdnxdr
09-20-2011, 06:59 PM
the night,
bathed in ink,
shadows my long day's thoughts
like a mirror image; I dream
darkly
LizaJane
09-21-2011, 01:51 AM
darkly
my thoughts torture
and undermine my peace
sending me into a spiral
of pain
Blarg
09-21-2011, 03:04 AM
Of pain
there is said much;
of its thoughtless planting,
of carefully tending its seeds,
little.
pseudo
09-21-2011, 06:52 AM
little
revelation
fallacy and peril
the sobering dichotomy
laid bare
B.D. Eyeslie
09-21-2011, 04:13 PM
Laid bare
before the gods ...
Aphrodite balking,
the last hope of humanity—
ruins.
kdnxdr
09-21-2011, 07:16 PM
ruins
expose lost hopes,
speak of dreams turned to ash
but inspire us to build again;
forward!
B.D. Eyeslie
09-22-2011, 04:35 PM
Forward,
pitter-patter—
the sounds of dancing feet
invading the feast of Christmas.
Tim-ber ...
LizaJane
09-23-2011, 12:55 AM
timber
all around me
waits to be set ablaze
in apocalyptic furor
and rage
celestialwolf
09-23-2011, 05:35 AM
And rage,
Washes over,
Like a great tsunami,
Destroying all sense and reason,
Darkness.
Blarg
09-23-2011, 06:41 AM
Darkness,
comfortable,
settles in for a nap
on ground that has been warmed all day,
waiting.
kborsden
09-23-2011, 04:59 PM
waiting
without a chair --
stood instead of seated,
will the doctor treat my knee caps
today?
B.D. Eyeslie
09-23-2011, 07:45 PM
Today?
Not all that good.
First, I ran out of gas;
then, I syphoned some from Clair's car--
mouthful.
kborsden
09-24-2011, 12:48 AM
mouthful
of spit and shine
for boots; automobiles
and carriage-less hours waxed into
distance
celestialwolf
09-24-2011, 06:02 AM
Distance
Is equal to
Rate multiplied by time
That's no comfort on a long drive
Back home.
LizaJane
09-24-2011, 07:40 AM
back home
his dreams are stored
in old Christmas stockings
and the grieving tears of his mom
today
Blarg
09-24-2011, 08:52 AM
Today
I will unwrap
my hero sandwich heart
and add some extra baloney
for you.
B.D. Eyeslie
09-24-2011, 09:01 AM
For you,
there is nothing
I wouldn't do to please.
Your loving heart deserves better
than me.
kborsden
09-24-2011, 02:06 PM
than me,
than tomorrow,
than yesterday's dreaming
of you, your lifetime; of hardships
bettered
B.D. Eyeslie
09-24-2011, 11:00 PM
Bettered,
yet still betrayed--
How do you find solice
in friendship so dark and toxic.
Addict.
kborsden
09-24-2011, 11:02 PM
addict
or empty shell;
shadow of your former
or reflected caricature
perhaps?
Blarg
09-25-2011, 12:56 AM
Perhaps
the bumblebee
not knowing it can't fly
believes that it has perfected
waiting.
kborsden
09-25-2011, 03:11 AM
waiting
for intellect
to append my belief
no longer spend my days, waiting
for God
LizaJane
09-25-2011, 03:37 AM
for God
the author of
my intellect, I wait
my soul quiet and still amongst
chaos
CDSinex
09-25-2011, 04:52 AM
Chaos
I know your name.
Your unwelcome visits
wreak havoc in my simple world—
once more.
celestialwolf
09-25-2011, 06:14 PM
Once more,
Unto the breach
Dear friends, once more; he said
King Henry V? No! But Shakespeare.
Playwright.
B.D. Eyeslie
09-25-2011, 07:18 PM
Playwrite,
author of life,
I pray for your insight.
What do you mean; "Sit down and write."?
Later ...
LizaJane
09-25-2011, 10:01 PM
later
I'll sail away
find starfish on the shore
love in places I never looked
before
B.D. Eyeslie
09-26-2011, 04:58 AM
Before
I fell in love,
everything was grimy.
Now everything is still grimy--
but love.
P.H.Delarran
09-26-2011, 10:53 PM
but love
has schemed again
tripping me with his tricks
so why do I flutter when you
catch me?
Blarg
09-26-2011, 11:37 PM
Catch me
in a wayward
glance at dancing goblins --
how do you know I'm not dancing
for you?
celestialwolf
09-27-2011, 12:12 AM
For you,
There’s nothing I
Wouldn't do to see you
Smile just this one time my sweet one.
Worry.
B.D. Eyeslie
09-27-2011, 05:34 PM
Worry--
with your soft tears
soaking my shirt collar,
your scented hair brings me hope of
more time.
LizaJane
09-27-2011, 11:06 PM
more time
spent in this cell
wasting away the hours
on fantasy, forbidden dreams
devour
Blarg
09-27-2011, 11:10 PM
More time
accumulates
like plague rosettes speckling
a house full of you in each clean
window.
kborsden
09-27-2011, 11:16 PM
devour
the rancid meat,
the fetid, worm ridden
carcass of a past, better hung
butchered
B.D. Eyeslie
09-28-2011, 03:59 PM
Butchered,
no vegans here
will kill the fatted calf,
yet his rampage has left the house
ruined.
CDSinex
09-28-2011, 09:02 PM
Ruined.
The bridge is out,
the lower road is gone.
The gentle brook enraged by rain—
now rests.
B.D. Eyeslie
09-30-2011, 12:05 AM
Now rests
the Boston team,
choking on its own tongue.
The saucy season led to this ...
collapse.
celestialwolf
09-30-2011, 11:50 PM
Collapse.
Before my eyes.
Life drains from your warm flesh.
Smoke rises from the gun I hold.
Whoopsie!
B.D. Eyeslie
10-01-2011, 05:57 PM
Whoopsie!
That's all you say?
With my shattered Ming vase
scattered on the floor at your feet ...
revenge!
celestialwolf
10-02-2011, 06:35 PM
Revenge,
Is a dish best
Served cold with a side of
Heartless laughter and insane eyes
-Methinks.
B.D. Eyeslie
10-06-2011, 12:07 AM
Meth inks
the book of speed.
How many words a day???
To dream—to try—to laugh—to cry ...
to sleep.
celestialwolf
10-08-2011, 06:54 AM
To Sleep
Or not to sleep
That's the question at hand
Oh how I wish it weren't the case
So tired.
CDSinex
10-11-2011, 06:23 AM
So tired
she now sleeps in.
The season to shine’s passed—
The harvest bare fields won’t need her
‘til spring.
P.H.Delarran
10-11-2011, 07:09 AM
'til Spring
opens her heart,
the lover only hopes
that Winter's ragng lust will bring
Flowers
CDSinex
10-11-2011, 11:29 PM
Flowers
are deadheaded
and tossed in the compost.
So much to be done before the
first frost.
B.D. Eyeslie
10-12-2011, 12:03 AM
First frost,
glasses empty,
not an ice cube in sight--
time for steaming mugs of friendship
to toast.
StephenD
10-12-2011, 12:31 AM
To toast!
,butter and jam
,loud laughs and company
-sweet and filling, clogging our hearts-
warming
celestialwolf
10-12-2011, 07:04 AM
Warmed us.
With yellow rays.
Beneath the gilded sky.
Silent, unyielding, powerful.
The sun.
B.D. Eyeslie
10-12-2011, 04:06 PM
The sun
and its brethren,
plucked from a darkened void--
harbinger of things to come, or
last gasp.
CDSinex
10-13-2011, 01:22 AM
Last gasp—
a warm fall day,
scent of a full woodshed,
and knowing tonight I will need
a fire.
Perscribo
10-13-2011, 10:04 AM
A fire
burns from one red
bulbous tip to the next
and turns my souvenir matchbook
to ash.
B.D. Eyeslie
10-13-2011, 04:32 PM
To ash,
a memory
(once so firm and sturdy,
now awash in indecision),
scattered.
celestialwolf
10-17-2011, 03:36 AM
Scattered.
To the four winds.
Never to be rejoined.
For as long as I ever live.
My heart.
B.D. Eyeslie
10-17-2011, 04:28 PM
My heart
used to yearn for
embrace in your fair arms.
Now, like gray bars, they imprison.
Escape.
CDSinex
10-19-2011, 01:03 AM
Escape
is so easy
at this stage of life, just
memories piled up, with no place
to go.
celestialwolf
10-19-2011, 05:28 AM
To go.
What's for dinner?
Too much take out- that's what.
I know home cooking isn't dead.
Cook some!
P.H.Delarran
10-19-2011, 12:23 PM
Cook some!
Tease your pallet
Browse the magazine racks
Therapeutic culinary
Desire
Blarg
10-19-2011, 12:38 PM
Desire
piles high on top
of loneliness's spire --
what is it that your face, so wan
retires?
B.D. Eyeslie
10-21-2011, 04:13 PM
Retires
to the slow life,
pecking at a keyboard
and pacing the family room
alone.
celestialwolf
10-22-2011, 08:26 AM
Alone.
In the dark night.
Spinning forever round.
Without life, purpose or meaning.
Astroids.
Perscribo
10-22-2011, 07:07 PM
Astroids,
born of circles
drawn to four perfect points,
intersect and fill the sky plane--
star struck.
celestialwolf
10-23-2011, 06:51 PM
Star struck.
In hollywood.
Big stars and fancy cars.
Stores catering to the elite.
Envy.
B.D. Eyeslie
10-24-2011, 04:53 AM
Envy--
the greedy voice
in the back of my head
telling me that you don't deserve
success.
CDSinex
10-26-2011, 01:30 AM
Success!
The woodshed’s full,
daring winter to come.
Time to take stock of a summer
well spent.
celestialwolf
10-27-2011, 11:35 PM
Well spent
After a day
Listening to her talk
Incessantly- unyielding chatter!
Ear plugs?
LizaJane
10-30-2011, 08:39 AM
ear plugs
won't drown the sound
of life's eternal scream
or death's steady marching beat to
conquer
B.D. Eyeslie
10-30-2011, 09:55 PM
Conquer
the darkest night,
the parade that follows,
and the everyman who witnessed
my death.
CDSinex
10-30-2011, 10:07 PM
My death,
as you well know,
will come as no surprise.
It’s just the time and place that are
in doubt
Perscribo
11-01-2011, 03:00 PM
In doubt,
skating these lines
with bearings full of sand,
the concrete ends at the edge of
ocean.
B.D. Eyeslie
11-02-2011, 08:56 PM
Ocean
nor mountain peaks
can part my love for you.
Till I answer death's hollow knock,
I'm yours.
celestialwolf
11-03-2011, 12:45 AM
I’m yours.
For the taking.
You need only ask me.
And I'll give you all that I am.
My love.
kdnxdr
11-03-2011, 08:40 AM
my love
recipient,
vessel immortalized,
the conncotion of dreams I've dreamt,
my myth
celestialwolf
11-05-2011, 07:28 AM
My myth.
That I am strong.
That I don't have feelings.
That I am indestructible.
A lie.
kdnxdr
11-05-2011, 09:47 AM
a lie
is a python
in all conversations
coiling slowly around the truth
who dies
B.D. Eyeslie
11-05-2011, 06:13 PM
Who dies?
Everybody.
The flighty and mighty
each will lay claim to sour earth
someday.
kdnxdr
11-06-2011, 12:54 AM
someday,
a day yet here,
waits in the womb of time,
conceived with the hope it matters
to live
kdnxdr
11-08-2011, 10:02 AM
stand still!
let the earth turn,
it goes on without you;
just enjoy being who you are,
your self
B.D. Eyeslie
11-09-2011, 04:49 AM
Your self
in self pity,
have you been there lately?
I can tell you what you're missing.
Nothing!
LizaJane
11-11-2011, 07:03 AM
nothing
is what I feel
as I stare at this page
with all its blankness that mirrors
my soul
kdnxdr
11-11-2011, 07:18 AM
my soul
chooses this day
footsteps I will follow;
believing, God will show the way,
I rest
CDSinex
11-11-2011, 11:27 PM
I rest
this time of year.
The woodshed's full again—
garden's stripped bare. The calm before
the storms.
StephenD
11-12-2011, 12:48 AM
the storms
the stress of gales
monotone, darkening
WIND! RAIN! HAIL! // the knowledge that it
will pass
CDSinex
11-14-2011, 02:21 AM
Will pass
you on the street,
I’ll nod; you’ll flip your hair.
Our thoughts welling with things best left
unsaid.
StephenD
11-14-2011, 04:34 AM
unsaid-
letters written,
burned. a wise decision.
later, they would be boxed and
laughed at.
B.D. Eyeslie
11-14-2011, 06:23 PM
Laughed at?
Hardly the case.
Not Ringling Brother's clowns,
they're the dementors of my life--
bankers.
CDSinex
11-14-2011, 09:40 PM
(My interpretation of ‘bankers’ is not meant to include the wage slaves who work in retail banking. [In case my sister reads this :D])
Bankers
with bloated souls
seek their rewards, hope in
vain to pass through the eye of a
needle
LizaJane
11-15-2011, 12:32 AM
needle
jabs in my soul
unrestrained and stinging
keeps alive piercing memories
of pain
B.D. Eyeslie
11-16-2011, 06:37 PM
Of pain,
I'll only speak
to the unmended heart,
hanging by a thread in its cage—
endure.
CDSinex
11-17-2011, 01:21 AM
Endure
the rains of fall,
the storms of winter, for
what? The green of spring, and summer’s
bounty.
kdnxdr
11-17-2011, 09:22 AM
bounty,
'tis but plenty
gathered to fill our pots,
hope that winter will not last
we pray
JohnL
11-18-2011, 01:40 AM
we pray,
feel visible
to the invisible –
so many voices call, which ones
answer?
darnzen
11-18-2011, 02:15 AM
Answer,
I look for one.
While I have lost my mind,
I have not lost my sense of truth.
Not yet.
CDSinex
11-18-2011, 07:03 AM
Not yet
ready to leave.
Geese circle Molly’s Pond
searching for a reason to stay—
like me.
JimmyB27
11-18-2011, 05:56 PM
I think I've got a bit too clever with my first attempt - that last line isn't too conducive to making a first line! ;)
Like me
you might wonder,
what life is all about.
Is there something we are here for
Ty two.
So I have a second, more sensible one. :)
Like me
or detest me
you shouldn't ignore me.
In your face, the elephant in
the room.
StephenD
11-18-2011, 08:46 PM
the room
that grows whispers
are they staring, cursing?
are they the ones talking? or is
it me?
CDSinex
11-19-2011, 05:34 AM
It, me,
you? One of us
has to go; I don’t care.
I could -leaving more space for your
anger.
kdnxdr
11-20-2011, 06:25 AM
anger
like a wild beast
is never satisfied;
constantly prowling, it's hunting
for you
StephenD
11-21-2011, 01:49 AM
for you
a cake i bake!
your favorite foods and drinks
laugh! celebrate! it's the day of
the dead
LizaJane
11-21-2011, 03:35 AM
the dead
don't walk around
seeking life to devour
in some macabre thriller dance
they sleep
kdnxdr
11-22-2011, 08:48 AM
they sleep,
dreams of our youth,
unlikely to awake;
unless, if we should try again
to dream
StephenD
11-22-2011, 11:03 AM
to dream
and not to give
not to give out too much
too much information of yourself
your self
B.D. Eyeslie
11-22-2011, 09:05 PM
Of yours
there is little,
which speaks volumes of you--
the blather of flying fur and
sprayed spit.
kdnxdr
11-25-2011, 07:17 AM
sprayed spit
splattered your thoughts
in such small increments,
your point like a Pollock painting;
get it?
CDSinex
11-26-2011, 12:43 AM
Get it,
push to the front,
the Friday of black souls.
The last shall be first, like in the
Bible.
kdnxdr
11-26-2011, 03:23 AM
Bible,
soul map,
illuminates
my eyes to see God's plan,
the juxtaposition of life
and death
StephenD
11-27-2011, 12:25 PM
and death,
are you tweaking?
you smacked-out? // so how did you miss
our tryst
kdnxdr
11-28-2011, 04:06 AM
our tryst,
a simple lark,
looks now like a vulture
waiting to swoop down for what's left,
roadkill
B.D. Eyeslie
12-01-2011, 04:09 AM
Roadkill
litters my life--
strewn about the pavement--
a high school version of West Side
Story.
CDSinex
12-04-2011, 11:19 PM
Story is a countable noun, so I used stories. If this is cheating, shoot me.
Stories,
as yet untold,
lie quietly and wait.
Dormant like seeds not quite ready
for spring.
kdnxdr
12-05-2011, 12:11 AM
for spring
I am prepared;
a stack of catalogs,
dreams of color where love will lie,
warm me
B.D. Eyeslie
12-05-2011, 05:43 PM
Warm me
down to my toes
with your gentle breathing.
The tide of your lust floods my ear,
lifts me.
LizaJane
12-07-2011, 12:47 AM
lifts me
beyond the shame
for a fragile moment
the waves crashing against the rocks
of time
CDSinex
12-07-2011, 06:37 AM
Of time,
I’ve heard it said,
it’s fickle and impatient;
a petulant child waiting for
no man.
kdnxdr
12-07-2011, 06:38 AM
of time,
I speak little
thinking of your return;
each day is adequate comfort,
I wait
I wait
for your footsteps,
listen for the floor creak,
wonder at the quiet of night,
always.
kdnxdr
12-07-2011, 06:53 AM
always
waiting bedside,
content with simple words
eager eyes follow my morning,
my friend
My friend --
under my skin
inside my brittle bones
well beneath every half-curved-smile,
you are.
Perscribo
12-07-2011, 09:51 PM
You are
my turtle dream
plodding wearily back
to the merging of pathways
more green.
More green
she said in haste,
fertilizer in hand,
help me spread the seeds of our love.
Dig deep.
kdnxdr
12-08-2011, 09:13 AM
dig deep,
find your lost child
playing, your hide and seek
somewhere beneath the workman's suit,
wide eyed
B.D. Eyeslie
12-08-2011, 08:55 PM
Wide eyed
and bushy tailed,
Mom would answer the phone
despite the ungodly hour:
Hello!
Hello!
I've been waiting.
Where have you been these years?
Such a long time has passed yet still,
you're you.
SaronaNalia
12-13-2011, 05:52 PM
You're you,
Still, after all
This time we spent apart.
But I am not the me I was
Before.
B.D. Eyeslie
12-13-2011, 06:26 PM
Before
I had the nerve,
I used to stare at you.
In my mind we were lovers; then
we met.
SaronaNalia
12-14-2011, 06:10 AM
We met
On Halloween.
You were the Mad Hatter, and
I, a fairy princess - what an
Odd pair.
kdnxdr
12-16-2011, 09:04 AM
odd pair,
hope and dismay;
fighting my own good fight
choosing to live every minute;
it's tough
Blarg
12-16-2011, 12:42 PM
it's tough
gristle, this life,
flavors predetermined,
every spice cut, mixed, spat, chewed,
unlived.
StephenD
12-16-2011, 01:15 PM
unlived-
women, money,
fame, power, and drugs.
existing in a mindset of
sadness.
kdnxdr
12-17-2011, 08:50 AM
sadness
is relative;
it comes, like an old friend
wanting to reconnect; it's you
crying
LizaJane
12-20-2011, 05:17 AM
crying
crocodile tears
apologies linger
in the stale air, brutalities
remorse
Remorse
is for the blind.
For who am I to see?
Eyes like rockets, heart like a wheel.
Fly round.
StephenD
12-23-2011, 09:00 PM
fly 'round
my buzz, a bug.
he flies around my head.
a nod, a nod // a bug is on
my mind.
kdnxdr
12-23-2011, 10:12 PM
my mind,
a little mush,
has stewed a bit in thought
cooking up a simple plot;
it's good
CDSinex
12-23-2011, 10:40 PM
It's good
to stand up here,
above snow-bare valleys,
quietly watching as winter
gains ground.
B.D. Eyeslie
12-27-2011, 09:12 PM
Gains ground
down to nothing,
and the losses mount up.
Perseverance and a good laugh
will help.
kdnxdr
12-28-2011, 03:58 AM
will help
to laugh, to love,
to move about with friends;
the alternative is lonely,
so live!
StephenD
12-28-2011, 04:20 PM
so live.
chop wood, carry water.
so focused, so aware
that every moment lived i am
happy
CDSinex
01-01-2012, 11:34 PM
"Happy?"
falls from your lips
much too often these days.
A riddle you ask that has no
answer.
kdnxdr
01-02-2012, 12:11 AM
answer,
responding true;
opening and closing, matters
not because, rather, why
you love
StephenD
01-02-2012, 05:36 AM
you love
he loves she loves
you are love he is love
she is love. we-r-love. goo goo
ga joob
B.D. Eyeslie
01-02-2012, 07:25 PM
Ga joob
nibish nik nak.
traba tu too mish mish.
Solo-onge piero ka boo
ga joob.
Translation: Sometimes I just don't make headway.
kdnxdr
01-03-2012, 06:45 PM
ga joob,
it's "Greek" to me;
speaking words of other
tongues translate in their meanings,
their thoughts.
B.D. Eyeslie
01-03-2012, 07:42 PM
Their thoughts?
That's what I mean.
A train wreck of logic--
like a frontal lobotomy
gone bad.
StephenD
01-03-2012, 11:17 PM
gone bad
Acidity!
basic until Mature,
the acrid Fermentaion! O!
sour milk
B.D. Eyeslie
01-04-2012, 05:51 PM
Sour milk
curdles your ilk
but makes your bones grow strong--
He-man, Super Man, any man
at all.
kdnxdr
01-04-2012, 07:18 PM
at ALL
is it enough
or, is there hunger more?
limitless consumption destroys.
desire
StephenD
01-05-2012, 08:04 AM
desi-
-re. a question
answered by a "because
i feel like it" ; a "no reason
at all."
B.D. Eyeslie
01-05-2012, 11:40 PM
At all
shocked and numbed
by the presence of light
in my now darkened frame of mind?
Sort of.
CDSinex
01-06-2012, 04:52 AM
Sort of
unexpected—
your being here today.
With nothing new to say, we smile
and nod.
kdnxdr
01-06-2012, 06:59 AM
and nod,
if you agree,
it's a beautiful day;
spending it in silence is bliss
with you
StephenD
01-06-2012, 07:43 AM
with you
i'll have just one
loving degradation
and right now i think i'll have just
one more
B.D. Eyeslie
01-06-2012, 09:41 PM
one more
perilous flight,
further and farther from
the logic and the land of cow...
and bull
LizaJane
01-07-2012, 10:26 AM
and bull
is what you spout
in your careless manner
unconcerned with propriety
and truth
B.D. Eyeslie
01-10-2012, 06:46 PM
And truth
is the last leg
which keeps us all upright.
One-too-many lies sets your pants
on fire.
kdnxdr
01-10-2012, 10:08 PM
on fire
fingers fly fast,
the story takes control
determined to find its own life;
read it!
Filmfeline
01-13-2012, 06:13 AM
Cool game!
Le Petit Bon Bon
by FF
Texas heat!
A lemon drop.
Melting away on my tongue...
A tasty treat under the sun, desire quenched.
JST- nice avatar (I'm jealous of your headgear!!!)
Filmfeline
01-13-2012, 06:15 AM
desi-
-re. a question
answered by a "because
i feel like it" ; a "no reason
at all."
I like this 1 a lot!
Xelebes
01-13-2012, 08:01 AM
read it!
quick brown fox
jumped over the ―
quick brown fox jumped the
f'n shark
LizaJane
01-15-2012, 02:03 AM
fin shark
circles around
my life, teeth bared, grinning
stirring fear in ocean depths of
my soul
yes, I took the liberty of changing f'n to fin ;)
CDSinex
01-19-2012, 12:40 PM
My soul
questions me, and
I, in turn, question it.
We ask if the other really
exists.
kdnxdr
01-19-2012, 07:15 PM
exists
sensually,
the knowing of your smile -
the highlight of all that you are;
don't leave
B.D. Eyeslie
01-19-2012, 07:32 PM
"Don't leave
a tip for her;
she sneezed in the pasta."
"But you finished the whole damn plate!"
"...It's good."
Perscribo
01-19-2012, 09:44 PM
It's good
to hear the train
right outside my window
rattling saucers, cups, and caboose
to move.
StephenD
01-19-2012, 11:15 PM
to move
is not to hear,
to see, to feel. // to move
is to watch, to touch; (it is) to
avoid
LizaJane
01-20-2012, 01:34 AM
avoid
truth and deny
its existence, silence
the messenger, only the brave
will speak
kdnxdr
01-20-2012, 07:05 AM
Will, speak!
autonomous,
stand and tell your stories;
let the whole world know that you live,
be you!
StephenD
01-20-2012, 10:33 AM
be you?
nah, be nothing!
be us! be love! cross out
that ego, and smile and laugh and
just be.
kdnxdr
01-20-2012, 11:52 PM
just be,
in all you say
let all your words be true
in all you do, equality
fair - just
B.D. Eyeslie
01-21-2012, 12:18 AM
fair—just—
foreign to me,
not that I think I'm bad,
I don't speak the language too good,
Capiche?
StephenD
01-21-2012, 06:44 AM
capiche,
little caprice?
this is hard business.
having trouble getting it
all down?
LizaJane
01-27-2012, 07:07 AM
all down
hopes go crashing
a photograph tells the
story, snapshot in time indicts
the heart
B.D. Eyeslie
01-28-2012, 07:15 PM
The heart,
my home of homes,
shuttled back and forth, yet
at least, still true to its owner—
languid.
kdnxdr
01-28-2012, 09:53 PM
languid
jazzy deepness
seeps into my body;
in a trance misery looks nice,
beckons
StephenD
01-30-2012, 12:51 PM
beckons--
a slip of thought,
an unraveling a-
-taxia. // pentagram mindset,
and dreams.
B.D. Eyeslie
01-30-2012, 04:16 PM
... and dreams
of a question
mark upon his forehead,
camouflage for his deepest thoughts,
nonsense.
LizaJane
01-31-2012, 04:52 AM
nonsense
reverberates,
a politic correct
society will pay its dues
in chains
okay, that was originally 'politically' correct, but had to shorten the syllables...it still means the same thing ;)
Perscribo
01-31-2012, 05:13 AM
In chains,
she meets nonsense;
one hand clapping, stifling
persnickety peals of burbled
laughter.
B.D. Eyeslie
01-31-2012, 05:38 AM
Laughter
and bawdy smiles
reflect 'round the table.
Next off, in this obscene frolic,
two socks.
JimmyB27
01-31-2012, 07:45 PM
Two socks
every wash,
one always vanishes.
Sacrifice to the laundry gods.
Cold foot.
StephenD
02-01-2012, 11:53 AM
cold foot
how long will this
preposterity of
grim grins stupor on? // amputate!
gangrene
B.D. Eyeslie
02-01-2012, 03:59 PM
Gangrene
between the ears—
it is we who suffer
and spoon feed the disconnected
#victims#
StephenD
02-02-2012, 08:28 AM
victims
of colds and flus
of sniffles and sneezies
and little coughs and wheezies // here's
a gun
B.D. Eyeslie
02-05-2012, 05:20 PM
A gun
would satisfy
my impulsive yearnings--
the lasting kiss of cold breath from
your lips.
catian
02-11-2012, 02:00 PM
your lips
red lipstick fun
draw out attention slick
appearances are measured with
glamour
StephenD
02-13-2012, 10:25 PM
glamour
an oily cover-
-up of all that fresh meat.
you glamorize your lust, but i
hunger
Perscribo
02-14-2012, 04:07 AM
Hunger
buttons the gut
of trousers walking shut
out from the warmth of clustering
biscuits.
kborsden
02-14-2012, 04:13 AM
biscuits--
a tinned fortress
on the kitchen counter;
infant mouths served by wandering hands
munch them.
catian
02-14-2012, 03:32 PM
munch them
crunch them or not
delicious on their own
especially with honey comb
perfect
Perscribo
02-14-2012, 06:57 PM
Perfect
heart-shaped boxes
filled with soft, round bon bons
along every store front window
for sale.
B.D. Eyeslie
02-14-2012, 07:14 PM
For sale—
a house of love,
shutters and doors missing,
but otherwise, a lovely home.
Need space.
Perscribo
02-19-2012, 07:33 PM
Need: space
(tall walls, windows,
sky dome) for (rays, the back
with grass, water, stone-clad altar)
garden.
catian
02-19-2012, 08:33 PM
garden
an eden great
of beautiful flowers
and heavenly scents allaround
special!
pseudo
02-20-2012, 01:06 PM
special
divine sanction
I will be in heaven
you will burn for eternity
take care
B.D. Eyeslie
02-20-2012, 05:13 PM
Take care
and bundle up.
The winds are cold and strong.
Surround yourself with warming friends
and rest.
Perscribo
02-20-2012, 09:25 PM
And rest
by the seaside
when low tide presses flat
the arc and crest of mind that rides
in waves.
B.D. Eyeslie
02-21-2012, 09:43 PM
In waves
of blue and gold,
my high school colors shine.
Not one of the marching band did
stumble.
pseudo
02-22-2012, 02:15 AM
stumble
in your pipe dream
a romantic soft spot
for the cognitive dissonance
of mind
kdnxdr
02-22-2012, 07:00 AM
of mind,
should it matter,
I would be; over thought,
under stood the question, "why not?"
it's me
pseudo
02-23-2012, 10:39 AM
it's me
syncopated
at zero vibrato
with a slight hint of heresy
peace up
B.D. Eyeslie
02-24-2012, 01:29 AM
Peace up
and please pipe down.
I knew this might be wrong,
but now that we're here, I might kill
you all.
kdnxdr
02-24-2012, 09:49 AM
you all
plus two others
equals anyone else
excluding any forgotten
numbers
catian
02-24-2012, 02:41 PM
numbers
perfect little objects
they wizz through time and air
they round the subject up down
sublime
kdnxdr
02-25-2012, 05:37 AM
sublime,
the thought expressed
comes as an exhaled breath,
stolen awe attempting glory
so low
catian
02-27-2012, 04:39 PM
so low
it came to rest
it brought so many layers
as though it was for all to see
colours
Perscribo
02-28-2012, 10:21 AM
Colors
(chosen by code,
blended by chromosomes,
oil-slicked onto matte canvases)
create.
catian
02-28-2012, 11:17 AM
create
a world of awe
enjoy the scenery
it glows with billions lights and scents
rejoice!
CDSinex
02-29-2012, 03:20 AM
Rejoice!
Seeds have sprouted
on a south facing sill.
All staring in disbelief at
fresh snow.
kdnxdr
02-29-2012, 06:25 AM
fresh snow,
frosty mantle
gay spring tosses aside;
flowers braided into her hair
she sings
B.D. Eyeslie
03-01-2012, 05:45 AM
She sings
happy music,
folk songs for the despot.
When the music soothes his highness,
she eats.
kdnxdr
03-01-2012, 06:40 AM
she eats
her broken heart;
unappreciated,
a rejected delicacy;
just pie
beadyredeyes
03-07-2012, 05:59 PM
just pie
in the eye not
an insult or disgrace
how could I miss this chance to see
you laugh?
Gilead
03-07-2012, 07:52 PM
You laugh?
A vapid bark
yelped in reply when I
remark that you look very like
a dog.
Debio
03-08-2012, 11:20 AM
A dog
Is man's best friend
Or so they used to say
Now it's that girl-bot from Japan
Hot tech
Perscribo
03-10-2012, 10:33 AM
Hot tech
turns a hand cold.
Repetitive uploads
of fleshless, web-crawling figments
kill nerve.
beadyredeyes
03-10-2012, 01:43 PM
kill Nerve
came the command
my mind went overload
to hunt a master assassin
meant death
Debio
03-10-2012, 06:04 PM
meant death
or unmeant death
either will end your life
does it really matter which way
one dies
kdnxdr
03-11-2012, 03:13 AM
one dies;
a planted seed
broken to reveal new life,
a small sacrifice for many
to live
B.D. Eyeslie
03-12-2012, 04:38 AM
To live
in honesty
is a right-minded choice.
But the left side of my brain is
a crook.
kdnxdr
03-12-2012, 06:32 AM
a crook,
a bending road
stole my dreams, carried me
against my will; lost in my thoughts
I hide
StephenD
03-12-2012, 12:06 PM
i hide
from real living
which may or may not be
non-existence, which is hill-air---
re: us
B.D. Eyeslie
03-12-2012, 06:40 PM
re: us--
a never was
that almost got started.
A bright flare dropping in sea--
red boil.
Debio
03-13-2012, 08:09 AM
red boil
a red hot pin
today these two shall meet
followed by a tissue or two
how gross
Talltree
03-14-2012, 12:25 AM
May I try this?
how gross
erotica
can be betimes, but some
instance lovely passionate too
- turn on
kdnxdr
03-14-2012, 02:55 AM
turn on
by a kindly word;
invade this quiet space -
animate my forgotten world;
I'm old
Debio
03-14-2012, 06:27 AM
I'm old
When I was young
I worked from dawn to dusk,
YOU! Get the hell off my lawn,
Damn kids
Perscribo
03-14-2012, 08:32 AM
Damn. Kids
are gone again.
How do I serve myself?
With batches of freshly prepared
poem soup.
LizaJane
03-14-2012, 08:58 AM
poem soup
tossed in a bowl
left to simmer in its
own raw emotions and bitter
rhythm
Debio
03-14-2012, 11:38 AM
rhythm
I don't got it
and even if I did
I am way too old for dancing
old fart
StephenD
03-14-2012, 05:04 PM
old fart
dressed smart the day
of his daughter's wedding
dressed smart (same suit even) in his
coffin
diamond egis
03-14-2012, 08:34 PM
coffin
marbled in Lent
among other gentry
sarcophagi appalling time;
stained glass
kdnxdr
03-14-2012, 08:44 PM
Welcome, Diamond Egis!
diamond egis
03-14-2012, 08:46 PM
ta
pleased to be welcomed, thank you
kdnxdr
03-14-2012, 08:47 PM
stained glass
spiritual pass
fragile preservation
holding secret stories to tell -
listen
diamond egis
03-14-2012, 08:53 PM
listen
beyond measure
honing in on pulses...
ineptitude, or, my senses
adrift
B.D. Eyeslie
03-14-2012, 09:03 PM
adrift,
six pack rings
on my brother's table,
floating on a skim coat of beer.
Ahoy!
kdnxdr
03-14-2012, 09:50 PM
ahoy!
adrift on love
we've lost the GPS,
sanity an interjection;
who cares?
LizaJane
03-15-2012, 12:47 AM
who cares
what is spoken
a cacophony of
voices, each straining to be heard
drowned out
Debio
03-15-2012, 04:32 AM
drowned out
in all the noise
and stress of daily life
the joy of watching girls and boys
laughing
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