Jack peered round the lounge door, plucked up courage, and entered.
Pa glanced up from the newspaper. “Hi, son. How’s things?”
“So so.” Jack bit his lip. “You’re not going to like this, Pa.”
Dad lowered the paper. “Hmm. Try me. What’s the problem?”
Jack tried to look sheepish while he held up the car keys and shook them.
“You want to borrow the car?”
“I already did.”
Pa shook his head and held out his hand. “Thanks. So you nicked it.” He hesitated then laughed. “I did the same if I remember. Jeez, I was young once, too. Okay, forget it. But in future ask, or at least tell me before you go. Just in case your mum or I need it. You lock the garage?”
“Y-yes.”
Pa half-closed one eye. “What’s with the y-yes?”
“The car isn’t in the garage.”
The newspaper rustled as Pa carefully folded it. “Go on.”
“It wasn’t my fault. The other car was parked squint—”
“Who was in the other car?”
“Nobody. But the road was wet and the corner was slippery—"
Pa raised a hand. “Hold it. Hold it right there." He gazed into space for a moment before continuing. "You nicked my car. You pranged somebody else’s. And, of course, it wasn’t your fault. Son, the first car I trashed was my dad’s. Speeding. Trying to be smart and outrun the cops who spotted me speeding. I got away. But out of their sight I overshot a corner and hit a parked car. Not a mile from here. It was empty, thank God. My dad came and collected me from the owner’s house. Know what he said to me?”
"No. What?"
“He said ‘To hell with the car. Main thing is you're unhurt.’ Then he said ‘I’ll support you, but you’ll get no sympathy. Just remember, next time there may be somebody in the car you just hit. And that’s manslaughter. And your life up the creek.’” Pa laid the keys on the arm of the chair. “That’s all he said about it. Now, what happened, son?”
Jack swallowed. “I was driving too fast and lost control and hit Mr Fraser’s car. Outside number twenty-seven. Car’s still there. I couldn’t start it.”
Pa nodded, then stood. “That’s tough, son. It’s also life. Let me grab my coat and we’ll take a stroll down and see what’s up. Mr Fraser probably wants to talk to you. Ready?”
Jack’s shoulders noticeably straightened. “Yes. Thanks, Pa.”
The tunnel looked dark. It seemed empty. It was cold and wet but Carl hoped it wasn't too long. It wasn't. It was creepy. Carl was glad to see the light at the end.
No 'was', 'looked', 'heard', 'felt', 'touched' 'saw', 'thought' 'smelled' or '-ing', please.