Hi all,
Question about verb tense in a query. My novel starts with a phone call, goes back in time, then meets back just after the phone call.
My query does exactly the same thing. I know queries are generally written in present tense. This in mind, my first para is in present, the second in past, and the third in present.
My concern is that an agent might think the second paragraph is backstory when it's not, it's part of the novel. But it definitely doesn't look right in present tense.
I really like my query. The function of starting with the phone call is to introduce conflict from the get-go. If done chronologically, it seems a bit boring, which is why I changed the novel in the first place.
I hope this isn't confusing. I know agents don't like backstory in queries but I'm not sure how else to do it.
Thanks!
Question about verb tense in a query. My novel starts with a phone call, goes back in time, then meets back just after the phone call.
My query does exactly the same thing. I know queries are generally written in present tense. This in mind, my first para is in present, the second in past, and the third in present.
My concern is that an agent might think the second paragraph is backstory when it's not, it's part of the novel. But it definitely doesn't look right in present tense.
I really like my query. The function of starting with the phone call is to introduce conflict from the get-go. If done chronologically, it seems a bit boring, which is why I changed the novel in the first place.
I hope this isn't confusing. I know agents don't like backstory in queries but I'm not sure how else to do it.
Thanks!