Review this Blog Please!

[tlotp]

Greetings all,

Here's the link that will guide you to blog : http://thewhisperofpapers.blogspot.com/ (http://thewhisperofpapers.blogspot.com/)

I would love to see your reviews about my blog contents, I would like to hear your suggestions and tips about how to improve it.....


>> Waiting ..... Thank you :)

[veinglory]

It may just be me but your blog format just happens to hit pretty much everything I don't much like in a blog format other than music. A rotating header that fades away as you try to read it, having to click to finish reading a post, redundant header, sidebar and full blog (same info three times) and a small popup....

[tlotp]

It may just be me but your blog format just happens to hit pretty much everything I don't much like in a blog format other than music. A rotating header that fades away as you try to read it, having to click to finish reading a post, redundant header, sidebar and full blog (same info three times) and a small popup....


thank you very much, that was pretty useful ... I will try to consider these things you mentioned..... any other suggestions ... :) thanks again :)

[FictionQuest]

I am going to make a guess that English is not your native language. I would suggest that before publishing, you might get a native English speaker to read it through and help you to edit the piece.

[tlotp]

I am going to make a guess that English is not your native language. I would suggest that before publishing, you might get a native English speaker to read it through and help you to edit the piece.

Well, that's not a guess but a true thing lol ... Yes, English is not my native language... Thank you for suggestion .. I would ask someone to help with that too ... :) thank you ...

[MamaStrong]

It wasn't something I was interested in reading. I agree with an above poster, the clicking to read more is annoying (in anyone's blog).

[tlotp]

It wasn't something I was interested in reading. I agree with an above poster, the clicking to read more is annoying (in anyone's blog).

Got that... but C'mon guys, I just changed the layout a few days ago... I still need time to change that... I might change the contents right away, but I do really have no time to change the layout... Anyways, Thank you too for your review ... and this is really so much appreciated :)

[veinglory]

Why the "C'mon". I would think you would want to know if something is an issue just for one person, or for most people.

In any case, perhaps you might try critiquing a few other people's blogs to get some more ideas--and just to be helpful.

[Cella]

Overall I like the color scheme. Grays are easy on my eyes.

:)

(...I also am not a fan of music playing as soon as I open a webpage)

[Domoviye]

The music threw me as well, it was confusing since I was listening to a new song at the time and couldn't tell if it was the same song or something different.
I like the layout, it was easy to read. I'm one of the types who likes to click on the article to read the rest.
But work on your grammar. I realize it's not your first language and some mistakes are alright, but it needs a going over two or three times.
Keep working at it, it looks like it has some good potential.

[tlotp]

The music threw me as well, it was confusing since I was listening to a new song at the time and couldn't tell if it was the same song or something different.
I like the layout, it was easy to read. I'm one of the types who likes to click on the article to read the rest.
But work on your grammar. I realize it's not your first language and some mistakes are alright, but it needs a going over two or three times.
Keep working at it, it looks like it has some good potential.

thank you very much guys ..... all of you ... These reviews and feedbacks are really really appreciated ...

[ScienceOfFiction]

Visually, looks mostly good. It does look a bit plain, it could use some simple, minimalist visuals, such as a photo or art on the right sidebar. But if you do that, it should be something that fits the visual appearance, and that might take some experimenting.

The main thing is that the title/header of your blog is hard to see because it's dark-on-dark. I would lighten "The Whisper of Papers!" up quite a bit.