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isachi
11-08-2011, 09:39 PM
I have two WiP that could use a few betas. One is m/m erotic romance (scary) but the other is a Silicon Valley drama with no explicit sexual content (though some short implied).

I manage my betas online so I don't have to worry about file types, email and such...here are the links

http://www.fluffyseme.com/story/access/45 <-- m/m erotica. Master/slave light-ish BDSM themes ... trying to make that type of story fun and thrilling instead of creepy and Stockholm Syndrome O.O so betas should focus on characterization and plot ... and whether I've completely gone over the deep end or not

http://www.fluffyseme.com/story/access/44 <-- NO PORN :D Just fun snarky The Social Network style drama. A lot of social commentary about the exclusion of women and minorities in the startup world. Beta should focus on keeping my ranting to a minimum (hahah).

thoroughgreg
11-09-2011, 09:33 PM
Hey there - I'd be interesting in beta reading these works. They sound interesting. Let me know what you're looking for.

isachi
11-16-2011, 05:56 PM
Hmmm... how do you mean? ^_^;;

thoroughgreg
11-21-2011, 11:09 PM
Sorry, I guess what I meant was a lot of people just want simple feedback, some want very detailed, what kind of feedback are you looking for? Either way I'd be happy to look it over.