A mentor/critiquer

[Mswritergurl74]

Hi, I thought I'd go ahead and asked to see if anyone would be interested in critiquing my story. It's a work in progress so far. It's a fantasy novel and I really want to be told what I need to work on. Like if the opening is good, if I need more description in the story, and if the plot seems interesting. I hope someone won't mind. Thanks.http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/images/smilies/smile.gif

[CaelinPaul]

Hi Mswriter :) I am in the same boat. I just finished my first fantasy novel and now begins the task of finding people who might like to read it. I would be delighted to offer my assistance but unfortunately I am a fairly new writer just like yourself :)

[silver_melusine]

I would love to help if you want a critiquer or mentor. If you want to send me a private message then you can.