Need reviews for essays

[glelewis90]

Hey,

I would really appreciate it if i could get some feedback on the essays I'm writing in memory of my grandfather.

They can be found here:

http://insertawesometitle.com/tagged/The_Ghost_In_My_Hard_Drive

Thank You Dearly,

Glenn

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