Whose hair is being combed?
Say Sally is a little girl, her POV, and her mom, Jill is combing her hair. I'm having problems coming up w/a clear sentence for this simple activity.
Sally sat as Jill combed her hair.
Whose hair? Maybe Jill was combing her own hair.
Sally sat as Jill combed Sally's hair.
Clear, but stupid sounding.
Jill combed Sally's hair?
Not really Sally's POV any longer.
Sally felt Jill's comb move through her hair.
Well, that was struggle. But still ugly. And doesn't really say what I wanted.
About the only way you can solve this is by context.
Sally sat as Jill combed her hair. Her mom was going out and wanted to look nice.
Sally sat as Jill combed her hair. Sally loved the feel of the brush.
This is bugging me.
Say Sally is a little girl, her POV, and her mom, Jill is combing her hair. I'm having problems coming up w/a clear sentence for this simple activity.
Sally sat as Jill combed her hair.
Whose hair? Maybe Jill was combing her own hair.
Sally sat as Jill combed Sally's hair.
Clear, but stupid sounding.
Jill combed Sally's hair?
Not really Sally's POV any longer.
Sally felt Jill's comb move through her hair.
Well, that was struggle. But still ugly. And doesn't really say what I wanted.
About the only way you can solve this is by context.
Sally sat as Jill combed her hair. Her mom was going out and wanted to look nice.
Sally sat as Jill combed her hair. Sally loved the feel of the brush.
This is bugging me.