So... I posted the first chapter of my NaNo novel in the YA share your work forum (titled Ysabel) and I got some great advice and crits... So I did a major overhaul on it and reposted the revision and nobody's looked at or commented. I would really like to know if what I did, what I changed, is good or bad or in-between... So if some of you would be so kind as to mosey over the the YA SYW and comment, I would greatly appreciate it. Thanks so much!
