I use suddenly and other variations too much. I think.
I'm constantly writing actions like this:
Suddenly, he wrapped his hands around my waist.
or
Instantly, Immediately, In that moment, All of a sudden, ect...
I notice I'm using it too much. Such in one in every other sentence almost. Is there another way to write out a fast happening action without using 'suddenly' or other variations?
As you can see, I write in 1st person POV.
Thanks
I'm constantly writing actions like this:
Suddenly, he wrapped his hands around my waist.
or
Instantly, Immediately, In that moment, All of a sudden, ect...
I notice I'm using it too much. Such in one in every other sentence almost. Is there another way to write out a fast happening action without using 'suddenly' or other variations?
As you can see, I write in 1st person POV.
Thanks