A mob boss named Murphy is in his office with his thugs all around. He is somewhat pissed off because he now has to deal with someone in his district who is getting uppity. He is about to give some orders to his men. (I inserted the name "Murphy" in a set of brackets in the below excerpt just to give you guys some context.)
Should there be a comma after the word "control"??
I'm proofreading someone else's novel.
And I do not own any of the "style" manuals. Would I have gotten the correct answer in A Manual of Style? What other books should I keep on hand for these nitpicky questions?
He [Murphy] scribbled on a paper, folded it and handed it to Gavin. After issuing orders and taking control Murphy’s charm revived.
Should there be a comma after the word "control"??
I'm proofreading someone else's novel.
And I do not own any of the "style" manuals. Would I have gotten the correct answer in A Manual of Style? What other books should I keep on hand for these nitpicky questions?