A Haiku because of a dare

[regdog]

I played Truth or Dare in Office Party. As a result I have composed a haiku about my love and attraction to QuickWit.


How I love Quick Wit
His fur makes me sneeze a lot
I squeeze him all day

[kayleamay]

Damn. I should have included a disclaimer.

[cray]

that was terrible.
i'm sorry to report it
but it's very true.

[Angie]

How horrifying
I wonder if there's a cure
for this obsession?

[regdog]

Damn. I should have included a disclaimer.

I'm glad you didn't. I wouldn't want the poetry regulars to think I was being a jerk or making fun of them :)

[dpaterso]

Thread closed on request, tho' Poetry forum mods may decide otherwise!

-Derek

[poetinahat]

This is more of a game thread, so I've moved it to the main Poetry forum. Otherwise, it's pushing a genuine crit-seeking poem off the front page.

[Priene]

Stuff like this often seems to wash up on the Poetry Forum. I suggest rewriting it for Erotica SYW.

[quickWit]

Can you feel the love? I can.

I can feel the love.

:heart:

[kdnxdr]

stroking fur, sparks fly
love can be a punishment
baring one's desire

[Angel_Faerie]

These Haikus are hilarious. Thanks for the entertainment, guys! :ROFL:

[blacbird]

I would never
write a haiku because of
a dare someone made.

[kdnxdr]

reluctant poets
stagger under syllables
carrying a load

[poetinahat]

I think this one's run its course.

Let's make this thread the last of its kind, thanks.