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Got some feedback on my manuscript from a beta in regards to the reader getting lost in dialog without attributions. I find this happens to me also a LOT of times when I'm reading books.
Seems like there are several ways to fix it.....
Seems like there are several ways to fix it.....
- direct attribution (which gets tiresome for everyone after a while)
- attribution by name of other character in 2-person dialog i.e. "Sue, you know that I've wanted to kill you for years."
- Attribution by context - i.e. character talking about how he wants to kill Sue "I think that slow poison would be the most pleasureable."