OK, I'm proof reading and I notice I've done something I'm not sure of. At the start of a chapter I may set the scene using omniscient POV. After a paragraph or so of description, I get into someone's head using 3rd person POV.
Imagine you have a bird's eye view of a house. You describe it, fly in through a doorway, describe the room, describe a person, and end up in their head, staying there for the remainder of the scene.
As long as you don't jump out again, is this terrible? I think I've seen this done before, maybe quite a lot. Another example, maybe you want to describe the beat and feel of a city before entering your character's head.
I think I do this 2-3 times out of 50+ chapters.
Imagine you have a bird's eye view of a house. You describe it, fly in through a doorway, describe the room, describe a person, and end up in their head, staying there for the remainder of the scene.
As long as you don't jump out again, is this terrible? I think I've seen this done before, maybe quite a lot. Another example, maybe you want to describe the beat and feel of a city before entering your character's head.
I think I do this 2-3 times out of 50+ chapters.